Because I Am

Because I am your star
life shines in the sky
night loves to sleep late 
the day closes its eyes

If you want be my star
become alive on earth
become the night’s lover
be a man in the dawn

Because I am your dream
life pierces in your mind
the night gazes into your soul
the day takes its stroll

If you want be my dream
seed life in my arms
pour passion in the night
transform the days into flowers

Because I am your warmth
life swims in your blood
night overflows your heart 
the day longs for the night

If you want be my warmth
allow blood to come alive
shed the night from the heart
the day caresses the night

You and I are in love
me and you in the night
If you are my dream
I become reality

You and I are in love
in the night, you and me
If I am a real women
you pass into eternity
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Smith Avatar
August 17, 2018 at 7:30 PM
Interesting and thought provoking. Well worth read. Regards David in NZ
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July 3, 2018 at 8:30 AM
This is quite beautiful.
Craciunas Avatar
July 4, 2018 at 9:11 AM
Thanks again.
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February 7, 2016 at 10:03 AM
Silviu Craciunas, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing you're poetry. LOVE LINDA
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January 12, 2016 at 2:58 PM
You have an amazing poem, Silviu... Love SKAT
Craciunas Avatar
March 20, 2011 at 6:22 AM
Thank you very much. Thank you for welcome.
La France Avatar
March 19, 2011 at 11:22 AM
A beautiful love poem, keep up the excellent writing and welcome~~
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March 18, 2011 at 8:08 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoyed your creative write with it's theme ... hope your time on Soup will be fun and filled with sharing with luv... our contests are free also ..check them out ..
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March 18, 2011 at 7:28 AM
this is well written and i love your use of metaphors but its a bit rough... beautiful but a diamond in the rough so tp speak
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March 18, 2011 at 3:47 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Silviu. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. Enter and enjoy some of the contests and I wish you the best in them. Love, Carol
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