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Because I Am

Because I am your star life shines in the sky night loves to sleep late the day closes its eyes If you want be my star become alive on earth become the night’s lover be a man in the dawn Because I am your dream life pierces in your mind the night gazes into your soul the day takes its stroll If you want be my dream seed life in my arms pour passion in the night transform the days into flowers Because I am your warmth life swims in your blood night overflows your heart the day longs for the night If you want be my warmth allow blood to come alive shed the night from the heart the day caresses the night You and I are in love me and you in the night If you are my dream I become reality You and I are in love in the night, you and me If I am a real women you pass into eternity

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Date: 8/17/2018 7:30:00 PM
Interesting and thought provoking. Well worth read. Regards David in NZ
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Date: 7/3/2018 8:30:00 AM
This is quite beautiful.
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Silviu Craciunas
Date: 7/4/2018 9:11:00 AM
Thanks again.
Date: 2/7/2016 10:03:00 AM
Silviu Craciunas, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing you're poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 1/12/2016 2:58:00 PM
You have an amazing poem, Silviu... Love SKAT
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Date: 3/20/2011 6:22:00 AM
Thank you very much. Thank you for welcome.
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Date: 3/19/2011 11:22:00 AM
A beautiful love poem, keep up the excellent writing and welcome~~
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Date: 3/18/2011 8:08:00 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoyed your creative write with it's theme ... hope your time on Soup will be fun and filled with sharing with luv... our contests are free also ..check them out ..
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Date: 3/18/2011 7:28:00 AM
this is well written and i love your use of metaphors but its a bit rough... beautiful but a diamond in the rough so tp speak
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Date: 3/18/2011 3:47:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Silviu. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. Enter and enjoy some of the contests and I wish you the best in them. Love, Carol
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