Beauty Passing By

I gaze out my window at the clouds drifting by
As they make their way slowly across the sky.
I marvel at the shapes my mind can see;
my vivid imagination runs wild and free.
Their beauty lies in their ever changing shapes
like a kaleidoscope whirling in my mind’s landscape.

At times the puffy clouds will turn dark and grey;
Storm winds will blow and it will rain all day.
The lightning will strike and thunder will crash;
Rivers overflow their banks in a flash.
When the storm subsides and the sky turns bright, 
the clouds will return to their puffy white.

I watch out the window as they pass down the lane.
Women, like clouds, leave an image on my brain.
They are stormy at times and will change with the breeze;
they pique my imagination and give my passion a tease.
They are both beautiful and delicate and that is why 
I gaze out my window as they both pass by.
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James Avatar
August 23, 2021 at 3:26 PM
Wondeful poem John, I like how you did the clever comparison. When I see a man go by it's normally a storm cloud I see lol. Another great write John. Hugs, Emilia : )
Gondolf Avatar
August 23, 2021 at 3:37 PM
I have to admit, Emilia, I just about fell out of my chair laughing at your comment. Do you really see us as a storm cloud? Love you sense of humor. Hugs, John
Tripp Avatar
January 6, 2018 at 9:48 PM
Beautiful, John and so sweet.
Gondolf Avatar
January 7, 2018 at 6:28 AM
Thank you, Rhoda.
Nusker Avatar
November 24, 2017 at 10:42 PM
I love this brilliant comparison. Wonderful poem, John.
Crasta Avatar
September 29, 2017 at 8:24 AM
What a pleasant reading and comparison
Gondolf Avatar
September 29, 2017 at 8:33 AM
Thank you for your kinds words, I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Jones Avatar
September 23, 2017 at 1:31 PM
Women like clouds an astute observation, well chosen words from beginning to end.
Gondolf Avatar
September 23, 2017 at 5:07 PM
Curtis, thank you for the kind comments.
Phala Avatar
September 22, 2017 at 7:32 AM
i like the end simile well stated nd the personification??
Gondolf Avatar
September 22, 2017 at 10:01 AM
Manyama, thank you for the kinds words.
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