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Beauty Passing By

I gaze out my window at the clouds drifting by As they make their way slowly across the sky. I marvel at the shapes my mind can see; my vivid imagination runs wild and free. Their beauty lies in their ever changing shapes like a kaleidoscope whirling in my mind’s landscape. At times the puffy clouds will turn dark and grey; Storm winds will blow and it will rain all day. The lightning will strike and thunder will crash; Rivers overflow their banks in a flash. When the storm subsides and the sky turns bright, the clouds will return to their puffy white. I watch out the window as they pass down the lane. Women, like clouds, leave an image on my brain. They are stormy at times and will change with the breeze; they pique my imagination and give my passion a tease. They are both beautiful and delicate and that is why I gaze out my window as they both pass by.

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Date: 8/23/2021 3:26:00 PM
Wondeful poem John, I like how you did the clever comparison. When I see a man go by it's normally a storm cloud I see lol. Another great write John. Hugs, Emilia : )
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John Gondolf
Date: 8/23/2021 3:37:00 PM
I have to admit, Emilia, I just about fell out of my chair laughing at your comment. Do you really see us as a storm cloud? Love you sense of humor. Hugs, John
Date: 1/6/2018 9:48:00 PM
Beautiful, John and so sweet.
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John Gondolf
Date: 1/7/2018 6:28:00 AM
Thank you, Rhoda.
Date: 11/24/2017 10:42:00 PM
I love this brilliant comparison. Wonderful poem, John.
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Date: 9/29/2017 8:24:00 AM
What a pleasant reading and comparison
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John Gondolf
Date: 9/29/2017 8:33:00 AM
Thank you for your kinds words, I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 9/23/2017 1:31:00 PM
Women like clouds an astute observation, well chosen words from beginning to end.
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John Gondolf
Date: 9/23/2017 5:07:00 PM
Curtis, thank you for the kind comments.
Date: 9/22/2017 7:32:00 AM
i like the end simile well stated nd the personification??
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John Gondolf
Date: 9/22/2017 10:01:00 AM
Manyama, thank you for the kinds words.

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