Beauty of Nature : Alliteration

Gazelles grazing gaily on golden green grass
Glaciers glittering gold like gleaming glass
Gardens glowing with Gulmohur and Gold stars
Golden gifts of God.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Martin Avatar
May 13, 2015 at 4:13 PM
Alliteration really works here, Nandita! Love your ue of Sapphic stanza.
Das Avatar
May 14, 2015 at 2:44 AM
Thank you so much for your supportive comments. Truly grateful.
Martin Avatar
May 11, 2015 at 8:58 PM
Excellent work with difficult form!
Das Avatar
May 11, 2015 at 11:21 PM
Thanks for reading this n for your very kind words of encouragement.
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
April 25, 2015 at 6:30 AM
a very clever write.. :)!!! delight in the eyes!//olive eloisa
Das Avatar
April 25, 2015 at 6:33 AM
Thank you so much. You write such lovely poetry. Your name reads like beautiful poetry to me.
La France Avatar
April 16, 2015 at 7:29 AM
Nandita, and you have penned a golden poem full of wondrous images, well done, 7, and thanks for visiting my poem, insanity
Das Avatar
April 16, 2015 at 7:33 AM
Thanks for your kind words of praise. Your poem Insanity was awesome.
Pinet Avatar
April 14, 2015 at 11:45 AM
You did a wonderful job here, beautiful use of alliteration. Well done. Emile. #7
Das Avatar
April 14, 2015 at 11:59 AM
Thank you so much for your kind words of appreciation.
Gurunath Avatar
April 14, 2015 at 10:31 AM
an excellent poem ... Nature unraveled !! nandita write like like God has blessed her !! all the best !!
Das Avatar
April 14, 2015 at 10:44 AM
Thanks
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