Notes About The Poem

Great Blue Heron

Northern Harrier

Whop-poor-will

Ruby-throated Hummingbird

 

Beauty of Birds


     The beauty of birds has always been my fascination. Oh, the haunting call of the
Loon and the devotion of nesting Robins.  Birds symbolize to me freedom. The
whimsy of their songs fill me with joy and wonder and I am captivated by the variety
of their many forms.  My Canada is blessed with rich bird habitats at our doorstep.
My wish is for future generations to hear the dawn song of the soaring gulls, and
the shrill of the pretty birds.  I pray these treasures will be here tomorrow. Oh, the
fluttering, undulating and gliding and the bird calls so lovely. Canada has forests,
and lowlands, tundra and lakes.  Our urban, suburban, farmland, parks, ravines and
harbours allow beautiful birds to exist and to thrive.

The Great Blue Heron
   standing motionless 
in shallow water    waiting
for a small fish to swim by
utters a croaking "frawnk frawnk"

Northern Harriers glide
    over marshes and meadows
bogs  and fields     uttering
their high pitched shrill "ke ke ke ke"

Whip-poor-wills love 
    the open woodlands
and the edge of green forests
these nocturnal     hunters
sing repeatedly "whip whip poor will"

Ruby-throated Hummingbirds
     found in gardens and parks
love to hover and     fly backwards
iridescent green with red throats
with squeaky clicks "chee dit chee dit"

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November 7, 2015

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Kendrick Avatar
December 24, 2015 at 10:27 AM
Congrats on your winning work..In the summer Whip-Poor-Wills sing me to sleep..I have only seen one in my life..Sara
La France Avatar
December 24, 2015 at 12:44 PM
Sara, thanks for visiting my poem, and the comment, I do love birds ... and now you know what a whop poor will looks like ..
Tor Avatar
December 21, 2015 at 7:26 AM
Loved this one Constance made it one of my favorites and my favorite for the contest,
La France Avatar
December 21, 2015 at 12:30 PM
Michael, oh thanks for the fave and the favorite, appreciate
A   Avatar
December 20, 2015 at 7:19 PM
Broken, Congrats on your Haibun Free-Style win. ~LINDA~
La France Avatar
December 21, 2015 at 2:01 AM
Linda, thanks for the visit and the congrats, appreciate ~
Scars Avatar
December 20, 2015 at 12:58 PM
Congrats on your win Broken Wings!! :) *Smiles*
La France Avatar
December 20, 2015 at 4:50 PM
Laura, thanks for the congrats and the smiles ~
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December 20, 2015 at 11:08 AM
BROKEN, Congratulations on your Haibun Free-Styled win. WUV **SKAT**
La France Avatar
December 20, 2015 at 4:50 PM
Thank you Skat
Beaufort Avatar
November 12, 2015 at 1:07 PM
Birds are very special creatures. They have wings. They can fly. Flying and soaring are magical. We can never quite be like they are even with all our technology. I would like to know what it feels like to be a bird.
La France Avatar
November 12, 2015 at 2:05 PM
Duke, I have loved birds since a child, I was a kid who loved nature more than playing with friends, I was forever looking and seeking knowledge of the bird world and still hold that interest ~
Allison Avatar
November 7, 2015 at 3:38 PM
This is delightful Broken Wings such lovely imagery good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
La France Avatar
November 7, 2015 at 4:57 PM
Thanks for the visit Jan, well you know how I love the birds ~
Horne Avatar
November 7, 2015 at 2:02 PM
lovely 'bird' write, my friend. I know how much you love all animals. Hope you & the kitties are having a good week x
La France Avatar
November 7, 2015 at 2:12 PM
Thanks for the visit, Jack, nice to see you on the soup
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