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Beauty Inside

Your beauty deep inside
Behind those bedroom eyes
Most men will fail to find
With you only as a prize

I can see it clear as day
Shining from your soul
Hiding from the prey
It truly makes you whole

So wipe away your tears
Set your beauty free
Leave behind your fears
Come walk away with me


Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 4/10/2017 1:14:00 AM
You write of 'true beauty' magnificently Tim:) The last stanza is so lovely with a peaceful feeling that everything will be alright. That 'aaah' sense after one has released a deep breath. Fabulous writing:)
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Date: 9/9/2016 9:11:00 AM
so much said in such few words Tim, congrats on your placement! :)-luloo
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Date: 9/9/2016 12:24:00 AM
Short, straight to the point and fabulous. Enjoyed it very much, Tim. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 9/8/2016 7:01:00 PM
Nicely done, Tim. This write has a lot of depth while still feeling quite casual. Nicely done, sir and congrats on your win. -G
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Date: 9/8/2016 12:34:00 PM
Tim, Congratulations on your win in SKAT'S "Premiere Contest number 9" It was my pleasure judging this one for my sister. Stop by and enjoy your win on Skat's Blog "BLACKBIRDS." with lots of love LINDA (For: SKAT)
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Date: 9/8/2014 4:35:00 AM
Very nice write Tim! Cheers! xxxxx D
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Tim Smith
Date: 9/8/2014 7:36:00 AM
Thank you Dorian.....hugs Tim
Date: 9/4/2014 12:59:00 PM
This poem is worthy of poem of the week! It really says a lot in a few words. :)
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Tim Smith
Date: 9/4/2014 1:02:00 PM
Thank you Darlene.. That is truly how I feel....hugs Tim
Date: 8/30/2014 3:28:00 PM
Hi Tim, I see you have 17 in the top 100. Cingratulations.
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Tim Smith
Date: 8/30/2014 3:31:00 PM
Wow....someone must like me....it's a good feeling.... Hope you are having a great weekend.... Just got off the baseball field....cheers
Date: 8/25/2014 10:58:00 AM
Poem is now ranked number one Tim many congrats:-) Hugs jan x
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Tim Smith
Date: 8/25/2014 11:08:00 AM
Thanks Jan....hugs Tim
Date: 8/23/2014 3:52:00 PM
Hi Tim, the one line in this piece that I query, "Hiding from the prey", her beauty is hiding from the hunted animal? Hiding from a human victim? Thanks, Robert
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Date: 9/8/2016 6:59:00 PM
I had the same thought. I think if we use it as a verb, as in hiding from "the act of preying, or plundering" it works, but it's unclear how that might make one whole. In any case, I tend to agree that it's ambiguous, and probably could be reworked to clarify the meaning.
Date: 8/23/2014 12:25:00 PM
Congratulations Tim, poem of the week;))) Check my poem "Fiery Red Flaming Poem" posted last night, let me know if it might have a chance for poem of the week? Or maybe I should ask APoetDestroyer! ;))) Best, Robert
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Robert Gruhn
Date: 8/23/2014 1:15:00 PM
tHANKS tIM, gEE wHIZ, i wONDER wHAT tHE sPECIAL fORMULA tHEY uSE Is tO cHOOSE pOEM oF tHE wEEK, As stated above, I asked once and they never answered me. It must be a secret! LOL ;))) Robert
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Tim Smith
Date: 8/23/2014 12:41:00 PM
Thank you Robert....I will check it out...Tim
Date: 8/22/2014 8:06:00 AM
Tim, this magnificent write is so deserving of this special recognition. Congrats on poem of the week!
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The LYRIC
Date: 8/23/2014 10:03:00 PM
And it's open to anyone willing to consistently work hard at their craft.. There is no gimme here. Tim's work is totally deserving!
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Robert Gruhn
Date: 8/23/2014 3:37:00 PM
Yep, I knew there was a clique on this site! ;)))
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Tim Smith
Date: 8/22/2014 4:39:00 PM
Thank you my friend, it will soon be replaced by yours and Serens
Date: 8/21/2014 10:07:00 AM
THIS SCREAMS POEM OF THE WEEK....and more. Body movin flow!
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Tim Smith
Date: 8/21/2014 10:20:00 AM
Thank you JS my friend....cheers
Date: 8/20/2014 10:03:00 PM
this is a wonderful read. a great piece. thank you.
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Tim Smith
Date: 8/20/2014 11:51:00 PM
Thank you my dear friend.....Tim
Date: 8/19/2014 1:54:00 AM
Wow I love it!
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Tim Smith
Date: 8/19/2014 2:48:00 PM
Thank You Talicia...I believe everything I wrote....hugs Tim
Date: 8/18/2014 3:19:00 PM
So nice to see this beautiful piece become the Poem of the WEEK! Congrats, my dear. It surely deserves it!
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Tim Smith
Date: 8/18/2014 3:24:00 PM
Thank you Eileen...It has really made me happy....It is the little things in life that we should enjoy...hugs Tim
Date: 8/18/2014 2:42:00 PM
Congratulations on being showcased with poem of the week. It is lovely
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Tim Smith
Date: 8/18/2014 2:48:00 PM
Thank you Andrea....your new contest is a hit.....hugs Tim
Date: 8/18/2014 7:53:00 AM
Yay baby I am so happy you are poem of the week :) well done :) :)
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Tim Smith
Date: 8/18/2014 7:58:00 AM
Thanks Cas :)
Date: 8/17/2014 6:22:00 PM
they say beauty is only skin deep Tim and its the beauty inside that counts - I am so so glad to see this as poem of the week:-) Hugs jan xx
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 8/17/2014 6:29:00 PM
hence why I don't show my picture - prefer to be judged for my poems not the way I look:-) Hugs jan xx
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Tim Smith
Date: 8/17/2014 6:26:00 PM
Thanks Jan, my sentiments exactly....hugs Tim
Date: 8/17/2014 2:01:00 PM
Beautiful Tim. Congrats! This is the poem of the week... Verlena
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Tim Smith
Date: 8/17/2014 2:03:00 PM
Thank you Verlena my good friend....hugs Tim
Date: 8/17/2014 10:35:00 AM
You are a true romantic-lovely poem. Congrats on POW
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Date: 8/17/2014 10:37:00 AM
Thank you Christine....This truly makes my day...hugs Tim
Date: 8/17/2014 7:03:00 AM
Ahh...the value placed on mere surface appearance...INFLATION DRIVES THE NATION, not just in the economy but embedded deeply into the aesthetic culture, too ! A gentle heart is priceless. With a face to match it is a ticket into heaven.
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Tim Smith
Date: 8/17/2014 7:07:00 AM
You are so correct...The heart and soul of a woman are her true beauty.......Tim
Date: 8/13/2014 11:16:00 AM
Thank you Tim.. Hope you are just walk away
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Tim Smith
Date: 8/13/2014 11:19:00 AM
you're welcome ...I wrote a happy birthday poem for you :)
Date: 8/11/2014 7:13:00 AM
A beautiful poem Tim. Most people go for what they see on the outside. That fades away with time, but the beauty inside lasts forever. Thanks for the visit and for this poem.... Lucilla
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Tim Smith
Date: 8/11/2014 7:23:00 AM
Thanks Lucilla... I like to look within...hugs Tim
Date: 8/10/2014 10:53:00 PM
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