Beauty In the Eyes of the Beholder

Lovely baby blues
Your eyes on our wedding day
Years melt and are gone
Age changes outward beauty
Memory keeps the moment







"A Memory Of Beauty" Contest   
Sponsored by: ^Rick Parise August 2010
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Devonshire Avatar
August 30, 2010 at 5:44 PM
A precious memory this wedding, Virginia. Congratulations on your placement in Rick's contest tanka contest! Love, Carolyn
Mehta Avatar
August 30, 2010 at 5:26 PM
Congratulations on the win in the contest, Virginia
Brown Avatar
August 30, 2010 at 4:51 AM
Congratulations Virginia on your win in Rick Parise's contest "A Memory Of Beauty". Love, Carol
Johnson Avatar
August 29, 2010 at 8:46 PM
Congratulations Virginia. Love, Joyce
Dietrich Avatar
August 29, 2010 at 7:31 PM
I really like this. A very appropriate topic to the challenge. Congrats on hm. LUv, Andrea
Sweetheart Avatar
August 29, 2010 at 6:46 PM
Congrats Virginia on your HM in Rick's Tanka contest... awesome as usual...enjoy your honor..with luv..
Johnson Avatar
August 6, 2010 at 6:35 PM
Very nice, Virginia. A great tanka and a lovely tribute to mature beauty. Love, joyce
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August 6, 2010 at 4:45 PM
Memories is what keeps the spirit alive. Enjoyed your fascinating way of expressing love holding its way. Good luck in the contest,..p..d
Culverhouse Avatar
August 6, 2010 at 4:12 PM
great write!! enjoyed! Thanks for stopping and looking at my Tanka.
Kendrick Avatar
August 6, 2010 at 3:58 PM
Great memory write..Good luck in the contest..Sara
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