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Beauty In Disguise

Crawling along the sidewalk, his tiny legs wiggling along with his wriggling, squiggly body, he creeps me out! If he survives the elements or the stampede of hard-soled monster feet upon his too-soft squishy body, he will perform a disappearing act! Spewing sticky strands from glands near his mouth, he twists himself into an ugly shell hidden and hanging from a common twig. Shedding skin, he slowly reveals his chrysalis self. At last, his inner beauty, that rare beauty in disguise, will have changed before our amazed eyes into the colorful radiant wings of a splendid butterfly! Written Jan. 4, 2016 and pretty much my only free verse so far this year!
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Roper Avatar
March 23, 2017 at 12:58 PM
Congratulations on your win again, Andrea … ~*
Kimathi Avatar
March 22, 2017 at 9:03 AM
Congrats Andrea, for your placement with this gift for us to read!!! ;-)
Singh Avatar
March 22, 2017 at 3:15 AM
Congrats!
Rycroft Avatar
January 13, 2017 at 4:22 AM
Congrats well done xxx
Roper Avatar
January 12, 2017 at 10:45 PM
Back to congratulate you on your win Hugs Eve
Adams Avatar
January 12, 2017 at 10:14 PM
Congratulations on your 1st place poem Andrea ! Once again, an awesome poem.
Poteet Avatar
January 11, 2017 at 9:43 AM
I cannot think of a more beautiful transformation, similar to the polliwog/frog, but to most people, frogs do not represent beauty. Congratulations, Andrea, on your well done piece, perfect for Julia's contest.
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January 11, 2017 at 3:04 AM
Beautifully written and perfect for this contest. Congratulations on your 1st place win. :) Hugs, Dane Ann
Smith Avatar
January 10, 2017 at 12:46 PM
Congratulations Andrea. Transformations are inexplicable...
Haight Avatar
January 10, 2017 at 8:29 AM
So perfect for the theme, Andrea, and you brought the disguised beauty to life with your wonderful imagery. Congratulations on your First Place win! Hugs, Sandra
Walker Avatar
January 8, 2017 at 8:48 AM
Just a beautiful tribute to one of natures greats.
Duet Avatar
January 7, 2017 at 1:08 AM
Lovely tribute to a lovely creature...Carole Duet
Vinson Avatar
January 6, 2017 at 7:58 PM
Oh heck yes! : ) Well done, Andrea! I think this is also called an 'inscape' - "the unique essence or inner nature of a person, place, thing, or event, especially depicted in poetry or a work of art."
Onclaud Avatar
January 6, 2017 at 7:07 PM
ohh my, pure beauty goes through a series of transformation, andie... picture perfect!.. huggs
Parker Avatar
January 6, 2017 at 3:42 PM
Nature does some crazy things to produce such fragile beauty
Y. Avatar
January 6, 2017 at 3:20 PM
Hi Andrea, You did a good with the contest. Isn't it amazing how that little caterpillar transformes into a beautiful butterfly? It reads like a winner to me. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. A without a doubt seven:-) Alexis
Roper Avatar
January 6, 2017 at 3:17 PM
This is very beautiful, Andrea, good luck in the contest. Hugs Eve
Garg Avatar
January 6, 2017 at 10:22 AM
What a coincidence Andrea, I raised 3 butterflies last year. Actually "We are all butterflies waiting to happen." Beauty of nature very well captured in words. A7 for this. Thanks for visiting "My Garden Family" ##Archana
Turner Avatar
January 6, 2017 at 10:08 AM
"wiggling along" "soft squishy body" "rare beauty in disguise" sounds like you are describing yourself, Andie:)
Dietrich Avatar
January 6, 2017 at 5:56 PM
very funny. hahaha. (The body you got right but I RUN when I walk!!)
La France Avatar
January 6, 2017 at 9:16 AM
Andrea, this is quite wonderful, you certainly found beauty in disguise with this amazing write, a winner ~
Green Avatar
January 6, 2017 at 6:40 AM
Very nicely done Andrea, every time I see a caterpillar I have similar thoughts, what will be if you survive.
Chircop Avatar
January 6, 2017 at 3:28 AM
This is beautiful sweet Andrea.
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January 6, 2017 at 3:05 AM
Wonderful the way you brought out its beauty...great observation. :)
Toluwalope Gideon Avatar
January 6, 2017 at 12:35 AM
This is beautiful, Andrea! A masterclass tribute to the art of God. A 7, no doubt. Best wishes in the contest.
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