Beauty In Disguise

Driving up to the restroom stop for a break,
I slowly got out stretching my achey legs,
this was one long drive during the holidays,
driving up north to see some family in the rain,

After the bathroom went to the vending machine,
where there alongside of it was the ugliest puppy I'd ever seen,
looking like an emaciated mix of collie and bull dog,
its face reminded me of nothing short of a hairy bull frog,

Feeling sorry for it I picked it up and put it in my car,
feeding it fast food leftovers and water we didn't get very far,
stopping at a pet store and buying it food and dog shampoo,
bringing it with me as I checked into the motel room,

Placing it in the tub I gave the ugly, matted flea puppy a warm bath,
shampooing it from head to toe it shaking like it wanted to dash,
finally towel drying it I got the dog brush out,
brushing it for hours trying to get the matted tangles to lay flat,

My arms were achey from the constant brushing,
the puppy looking up at me like she understood,
giving her a hug and a biscuit for being so good,
her hair now had a vibrant sheen to it the color of blonde wood,

Putting a nice pink collar on her was the finishing touch,
I picked her up to admire her and see if there were anymore bugs,
she no longer looked like an ugly abandoned puppy to me,
but cuter than an expensive one you'd see on tv,

My Mom that year had the best Christmas ever,
giving her something alive rather than just another sweater,
waking up that morn to find the puppy under her tree,
all of us running over to it as it started to pee.




12-26-16
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Robinson Jr. Avatar
January 3, 2017 at 4:54 PM
I agree w/Betty. This heartwarming poem gave me a happy smile. You're the best at doing that to me, Cheryl. I love everything about this poem. Poor thing must've been frightened when all of y'all bum rushed her. That was some good story telling done by you w/this poem. Excellent write. May many blessings of love be upon you.
Hoffman Avatar
January 3, 2017 at 7:27 PM
Glad you liked it Freddie; it is fictional btw…already have 3 dogs and 2 cats too many, lol! Thanks for kind comment & visit and many blessings to you too~Che
Hauser  Avatar
December 27, 2016 at 2:37 PM
This is so good on so many different levels!
Hoffman Avatar
December 27, 2016 at 8:45 PM
'thanks so much Mike; you are so kind!:)
Janko Avatar
December 26, 2016 at 9:12 PM
Dear Cheryl, good for you rescuing the puppy! This poem made me laugh and shed a happy tear as well. Sounds like everyone was a winner this holiday, except perhaps the tree! Really enjoyed. Betty
Hoffman Avatar
December 26, 2016 at 9:19 PM
Thank you so much Betty; I have thought about giving my Mom a puppy in real life but she keeps so busy she might not have time for one! This is a purely fictional write; thanks for kind & witty visit Betty!~Che :)
Anish Avatar
December 26, 2016 at 9:07 PM
You tell a heartwarming tale in this ode! Thank you for your kind words! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
Hoffman Avatar
December 26, 2016 at 9:16 PM
Thank you so much Matt for your kind words as well~Peace & love back~Che :)
Green Avatar
December 26, 2016 at 11:59 AM
The ending was funny but what a heart touching story. I love dogs and hate to see them lost or running wild. This was wonderful and made me smile so much. Not only did you give your mother a gift, you gave one to that puppy as well. Nicely done.
Hoffman Avatar
December 26, 2016 at 7:49 PM
Thanks so much Chris for your kind comment and glad that I made you smile! This is a fictional write btw…~Che :)
Allison Avatar
December 26, 2016 at 10:03 AM
aww made me smile made me cry - glad puppy given a bath in the poem .. sounds like it was 'very alive' before the wash and brush up - a great message - a pet is for life not just for Christmas:-) hugs Jan xx
Hoffman Avatar
December 26, 2016 at 11:00 AM
Sorry Jan, that comment was meant for Supraja; thanks so much for kind comment and so true about a pet is for life & not just for Christmas! Hugs back~ Che xx
Hoffman Avatar
December 26, 2016 at 10:58 AM
Thanks so much Supraja for visit & a big 7! its supposed to be free verse but its hard for me not to rhyme, lol!~Che
Kannan Avatar
December 26, 2016 at 9:51 AM
So cute... Ha ha...Loved the ending... A big 7 ...
Hoffman Avatar
December 26, 2016 at 11:01 AM
Thanks so much Supraja for visit & a big 7! It is supposed to be free verse but its hard for me not to rhyme, lol!~Che
Flats Avatar
December 26, 2016 at 9:44 AM
Aw, you had me at "puppy." I'll read this to Skeeter the wonder dog and see what he thinks;-). Warm fuzzy of the day award! Huggapups! ~ j
Hoffman Avatar
December 26, 2016 at 10:54 AM
Lol, Skeeter is a cute name for a dog; hope he enjoys the poem! Thanks for warm fuzzy award too~Huggapups back~Che
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