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Beauty Duty

A girl who stood out in the queue Was surprised how quickly love grew But deep down inside She knew that he lied And her dream would end with eye dew

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 11/26/2021 7:57:00 PM
Hello Rico ... appears a predator was moving in - thanks again Rico - Lindsay
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Rico Leffanta
Date: 11/27/2021 9:25:00 AM
Another carnivore . . ..Aloha¬!
Date: 11/26/2021 7:24:00 PM
Funny Rico....Love in the queue can die out without a clue !
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Rico Leffanta
Date: 11/27/2021 9:24:00 AM
Quite true! Aloha!
Date: 11/23/2021 8:12:00 PM
So incredibly clever, Rico. Love those last two words! :) gw
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Rico Leffanta
Date: 11/24/2021 11:23:00 AM
God created eye dew, and greedy men created the, "I do"! Aloha!
Date: 11/23/2021 4:00:00 PM
that happens so often Rico, pray she moved on and got a twinkle in her eye instead :)
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Date: 11/23/2021 1:19:00 PM
love the word play, rico!
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Date: 11/23/2021 12:59:00 PM
what a rat:-( hugs Jan x
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Date: 11/23/2021 11:24:00 AM
Tom is right screwed by a lying rat.
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Date: 11/23/2021 10:41:00 AM
It wasn't to be, let down by a lying rat. Tom
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Rico Leffanta
Date: 11/24/2021 11:22:00 AM
My eldest sister was endowed with mountains for breasts, and learnt in her early teens that males were not really interested in her, but would say or do anything just to get their hands on her assets. Beauty has a price to pay! Thank you for reading and commenting! Aloha!