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Beauty-Doll

I've seen my shadow in your eyes, I've seen my double in you all, I've seen it slow how it dies, Rehearsing like an actor changing role [s], Your bluebell shiny sight is attractive, Your spring-like smile is a call, Your flashy blink is very active, When animating your beauty...mole, Your brown hair is really matching, Your baby face..Like a doll, Your longer neck is also catching, With your crystal front and the poll.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 9/22/2015 9:04:00 AM
Abder, nicely penned poem and I agree quite enchanting, congratulations on having it featured this week ~~
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Abder Derradji
Date: 9/22/2015 9:35:00 AM
Thanks Broken wings for your thoughts a big hugx
Date: 9/20/2015 12:48:00 PM
A warm, enchanting verse this is! No wonder it was chosen for featuring in PS homepage! ;-)
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Abder Derradji
Date: 9/20/2015 2:16:00 PM
HiTeddy! thanks for your comment. I hope you will read others which I have just submitted Abder
Date: 9/10/2015 12:33:00 PM
Abder, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Abder Derradji
Date: 9/11/2015 2:50:00 AM
Hi Linda thanks for the thought, I am glad that I discovered a beautiful site to communicate with nice people like you all. Will add more new poems next and I hope you will like some of them. much love Abder x
Date: 9/8/2015 11:10:00 AM
Abder, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Abder Derradji
Date: 9/9/2015 8:49:00 AM
sorry I meant Poetry not poetery! ha..ha.. Abder
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Abder Derradji
Date: 9/9/2015 8:48:00 AM
Hi Skat, thanks for your note and thoughts. Well I am a British living in reading Berkshire England. former lecturer in international relations. very well travelled throughout Europe, Asia, and the Middle east for both work and pleasure. I am also well published in my field of current affairs. my expertise is in political violence / terrorism and counter terrorism and related. Besides poetry I am also an artist (drawing painting) and also assigned by an agency for film extra / actor. I do write poetery in other languages like Arabic, French, Italian, and know other languages like Polish (intermediate), Indonesian (beginner), Russian and Latvian (beginner). I am also a chef and well informed in world gastronomy . I love travelling, and meeting people and have loads of other hobbies. Abder x

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