Newton Ranaweera Poet Dodoitsu

Beauty Blasts

Morning mist whispers to trees
Juice cascades with buzz and hum
Night flurry tells tall tales  
~~ Autumn’s beauty blasts  


Syllabic count: 7/7/7/5

*A 4th Place* in the following contest (judged on Oct. 4, 2020)

Oct. 1, 2020
Writing Challenge - Dodoitsu
Contest Sponsor: Constance La France

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Darlene De Beaulieu October 19, 2020 at 11:39 AM Hello Newton Arach,I like the way you described autumn. I am proud of you getting 4th place. Enjoy your day my friend. Darlene De Beaulieu October 20, 2020 at 3:22 PM Hello Arach newton, hi! You are so very welcomed. Enjoy your evening my friend. Newton Ranaweera October 19, 2020 at 2:58 PM Thank you so much, Darlene, for this great comment!!

Andrea Dietrich October 12, 2020 at 12:28 PM Sure enjoyed the imagery here, Newton. Belated Congrats Newton Ranaweera October 12, 2020 at 8:47 PM Thank you so much, Andrea, for this lovely comment!!

Jan Allison October 6, 2020 at 3:46 PM I adore the imagery throughout the poem, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx Newton Ranaweera October 6, 2020 at 4:14 PM Thank you so much for the great comment, Jan!!

Constance La France October 5, 2020 at 7:49 AM Newton, congratulations on your win in my Dodoitsu Writing Challenge with this wonderful poem, nice image too _Constance Newton Ranaweera October 6, 2020 at 6:29 AM Thank you so much, Lance, for the placement and the comment!!

Linda Alice Fowler October 4, 2020 at 1:27 PM Nice one Newton! Congratulations! Linda Newton Ranaweera October 4, 2020 at 7:36 PM Thank you so much, Linda, for this sweet comment!!

Anne-Lise Andresen October 4, 2020 at 11:34 AM - Congratulations on your beautiful poem, Newton :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Newton Ranaweera October 4, 2020 at 7:35 PM Thank you so much, Anne-Lise, for this lovely comment!!

Jack Horne October 1, 2020 at 7:32 AM love this lovely dodoitsu Newton Ranaweera October 1, 2020 at 12:25 PM Thank you so much, Jack, for this great comment!!

Anne-Lise Andresen October 1, 2020 at 4:01 AM - A beautiful poem for the contest, Newton ... good luck :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Newton Ranaweera October 1, 2020 at 12:24 PM Thank you so much, Anne-Lise, for this lovely comment!!