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Beauty Blasts

Morning mist whispers to trees Juice cascades with buzz and hum Night flurry tells tall tales ~~ Autumn’s beauty blasts Syllabic count: 7/7/7/5 *A 4th Place* in the following contest (judged on Oct. 4, 2020) Oct. 1, 2020 Writing Challenge - Dodoitsu Contest Sponsor: Constance La France

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Date: 10/19/2020 11:39:00 AM
Hello Newton Arach,I like the way you described autumn. I am proud of you getting 4th place. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/20/2020 3:22:00 PM
Hello Arach newton, hi! You are so very welcomed. Enjoy your evening my friend.
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Date: 10/19/2020 2:58:00 PM
Thank you so much, Darlene, for this great comment!!
Date: 10/12/2020 12:28:00 PM
Sure enjoyed the imagery here, Newton. Belated Congrats
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Date: 10/12/2020 8:47:00 PM
Thank you so much, Andrea, for this lovely comment!!
Date: 10/6/2020 3:46:00 PM
I adore the imagery throughout the poem, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 10/6/2020 4:14:00 PM
Thank you so much for the great comment, Jan!!
Date: 10/5/2020 7:49:00 AM
Newton, congratulations on your win in my Dodoitsu Writing Challenge with this wonderful poem, nice image too _Constance
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Date: 10/6/2020 6:29:00 AM
Thank you so much, Lance, for the placement and the comment!!
Date: 10/4/2020 1:27:00 PM
Nice one Newton! Congratulations! Linda
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Date: 10/4/2020 7:36:00 PM
Thank you so much, Linda, for this sweet comment!!
Date: 10/4/2020 11:34:00 AM
- Congratulations on your beautiful poem, Newton :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/4/2020 7:35:00 PM
Thank you so much, Anne-Lise, for this lovely comment!!
Date: 10/1/2020 7:32:00 AM
love this lovely dodoitsu
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Date: 10/1/2020 12:25:00 PM
Thank you so much, Jack, for this great comment!!
Date: 10/1/2020 4:01:00 AM
- A beautiful poem for the contest, Newton ... good luck :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/1/2020 12:24:00 PM
Thank you so much, Anne-Lise, for this lovely comment!!

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