Beauty

Caramel eyes so soft and sweet Honeysuckle touch when we meet Amber shades in your hazel hair Running down a skin so fair Melt into me and make me whole Align your heart with my soul Invade my mind with thoughts of you Never forget that I love You Everlasting beauty I am yours

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Kp Nunez

Date: 8/4/2015 6:31:00 AM

The poem itself is a beauty, Tim. Kim

Julia Ward

Date: 8/3/2015 2:23:00 PM

Yours of 1:53 PM - thanks.

Julia Ward

Date: 8/3/2015 1:50:00 PM

Very nice... People are saying "GL for contest", but I can't see one on beauty. What is the title of the contest, pl.?

Tim Smith
Date: 8/3/2015 1:53:00 PM

They might think it is for the tribute contest but this is not for any contest. Thanks Julia

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 8/3/2015 5:59:00 AM

The alignment in love happens automatically when love exists! Beautiful romantic poem that melts every heart, dear Tim! A seven!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 8/3/2015 2:33:00 AM

Tim that is definitely beyond beautiful even! Happy Week! =')~Olive Eloisa

Arthur Vaso

Date: 8/2/2015 11:54:00 PM

A simple title with such a beautiful and deep message of love, just a great write here Tim

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 8/2/2015 3:28:00 PM

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 8/2/2015 3:27:00 PM

How I love this ! So special it is, extremely beautiful. .I so love that Honeysuckle and every word...: ) . I cant give it a ten , so I ll have to give it a sevenm and a favourite.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/2/2015 11:19:00 AM

- "Beauty": the title worthy ..... it's a BEAUTY !!!! - I wish you luck in the contest ..... and a fantastic Sunday and a great new week, Tim - hugs // Anne-Lise :)