Beautiful Wreck

There’s a place somewhere
It’s been long forgotten, 
Where shades of lilac, cream and white
Fill the foggy world far into the misty sea.
The murky skies with ivory clouds,
Shield it from heavens view.
So that the shells may lie in  peace.

Amidst these shattered, clattered shells
Lies a boat which sadly sunk.
The wood decayed,
The frame unchanged.
On which sailors had  once,
Ate and drank in company
And walked and readily slept.

They dreamed about the seven seas
And the treasure held by each.
So I close my eyes to see a golden light
Which Illuminates the ship again.
While sailors danced and sang
On that merry drink of rum.
With lyrics of old pirate songs.

Amongst their voices I hear the waves,
They crash beneath my feet.
As the sailor’s songs turn to screams.
Sorrowfully they say goodbye
To their dreams which fill the sky
As they sink unable to fly.

The salty spray splashes my face
And opens up my eyes
Amongst the shattered, clattered shells
I stand again.
And in my sight there it lays
The ship that once had merry sailors
Only now a wreck.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Lamoureux Avatar
November 9, 2014 at 3:15 AM
My pleasure Rochelle, if you have a chance come visit me, there may be so writing to your liking. Good night.
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November 9, 2014 at 2:46 AM
You are a good story teller. You have skills, I am enjoying your writing.
Smith Avatar
November 9, 2014 at 3:10 AM
Hi Richard! I'm so glad that my writing is enjoyed by someone! Your comments on my poems today have honestly made my day to day! I hope you have a wonderful day ^_^
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November 4, 2014 at 5:29 AM
Hi Rochelle, You tell a very soothing tale about sea, broken ships, treasures and sailors. Nice adventure. I never heard about "readily slept" but it is an interesting concept. I wish I could do that. I liked your story poem. Nice job. Nicely composed. Have a great day. Earl
Smith Avatar
November 9, 2014 at 3:09 AM
Hi Earl, thanks for taking the time to comment! I'm really happy about your comment because this was one of those poems I reworked several times! Hope you have a lovely day! ^_^
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