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Beautiful Transaction

He parlayed his handsome, Against her soft assets. He saw her and she raised him. Both folded, spent. He, a sure bet. She, a wild gamble. Together, a beautiful transaction.

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Harry Horsman

Date: 1/20/2018 7:41:00 AM

love to go back and see the first post of a poet, and wow wow this is amazing,

Rhoda Tripp
Date: 1/20/2018 7:28:00 PM

Awww. Thank you, Harry. You're very sweet. Thanks for your encouragement and support

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/17/2018 3:01:00 PM

ooh la la. I like this metaphor very much. Just coming back to see your first post here. Looks like you started around Thanksgiving. I too started here around a holiday. It was Christmas, right before 2010!

Rhoda Tripp
Date: 1/17/2018 3:17:00 PM

Wow! A seven year veteran of the Soup. Awesomeness. Thank you for your support and kindness and your warm welcome. It is people like you that make Soup a wonderful place to be.

Silent One

Date: 12/23/2017 12:12:00 PM

Thought U would have a look at your first post, opposites attract and this looks like a match made in heave... well written Rhoda..

Rhoda Tripp
Date: 12/25/2017 11:14:00 AM

Thank you, Dearheart

James Inman

Date: 12/12/2017 5:37:00 AM

Your first post is quite seductive Rhoda. Wonderful word play.

Rhoda Tripp
Date: 12/12/2017 6:21:00 AM

Thank you very much, James

Susan Ashley

Date: 12/9/2017 1:04:00 PM

Rhonda, an enticing and enthralling write with clever word play that made my heart leap with delight and inspired a smile. Excellent! Warmest wishes ~Susan

Rhoda Tripp
Date: 12/10/2017 5:14:00 PM

Thank you so very much, Susan. Its quite a compliment coming from a talent such as yours. I truly am humbled. Glad you enjoyed my write. Blessings to you.

Johnny Martinez

Date: 12/5/2017 11:24:00 PM

An incredible write. It take a special talent to write like that. I play poker once in a while and after reading this it will take on a different meaning for me. Well done.

Rhoda Tripp
Date: 12/6/2017 7:31:00 AM

Thank you so much, Johnny for your kind compliment. Poker will never be the same! Xoxo

CayCay Jennings

Date: 12/2/2017 9:27:00 AM

I just scrolled down and found a woman who looks just like me .... so much for me doing the remembering part! Please laugh, I am ... CayCay

Rhoda Tripp
Date: 12/2/2017 11:03:00 AM

Lmao. I'm humbled you liked this enough to read it twice. I'm dying. So cute! Love...

CayCay Jennings

Date: 12/2/2017 9:26:00 AM

I am not a good getter doner! Saying that, I've wanted to hug you, thank you, since you left some wonderfully encouraging comments on a few of my poems. You needn't remember, I'll do that part! Any way, I came to do that and found this clever gem. It brought quite a grin to my face. I'm going to check out another (you enticed me), never know where I will or won't go! All the best ... CayCay

Rhoda Tripp
Date: 12/2/2017 11:02:00 AM

Lol. You are so awesome and your writing, exquisite and eloquent with humor mixed in. Truly shows your talent.