Beautiful Souls - a Collaboration With Jimmy Anderson

Beautiful Souls Collaborating - A Collaboration with Walayee Whitlock
Jimmy A

With this pen in my hand I am so ready to collaborate.
Your body is a wonderland, and your hourglass frame I sure appreciate!
So tell me whatcha think, and we can try something new.
Your heart is the missing link, so now you see how bad I need you!
Through this stanza, can you feel our energy and the magic we make?
It's a special bond we have in our poetry that removes all the heartache.
We come together as one and built a solid everlasting foundation.
Forever we will shine brighter than the sun through our love and collaboration!!

Lay

The mere thought of a collaboration is a quite remarkable sensation
I've had a bit of writers block and now you've given me inspiration
The words you've penned and questions you've asked
It seems you know me; like you've seen my hidden stash
My stash of hidden emotions, heartache, and pain
But how could this be when both are locked away behind years of rusty chains
Then I remembered you had the key
The "missing link;" our poetry
It unlocks the chains and frees the pain
It's what keeps us sane...and "wonderland" is what remains
In your letter you asked a few questions which require an explanation
And answers you shall have little by little, but only via our collaboration...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011


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Date: 3/4/2011 6:38:00 AM
Wow! I love it!
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Date: 2/18/2011 9:50:00 PM
As I said under Jimmy's Lay, great collaboration...perfect rhyming and wonderful flow! Looking forward to the others. Always, Annalise
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Date: 2/18/2011 7:17:00 PM
I have done two collaberations and one went perfect and was so much fun, and the other one was aweful like fighting a raging ocean, you and Jimmy did an amazing job with this, just wonderful, you work well together~~
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Date: 2/18/2011 5:22:00 PM
Bravo to u both for this awesome collaboration Lay .. and Jimmy too... delicate liens of expression in romantic sequences luv.. enjoyed both creative minds in this one luv..
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Date: 2/18/2011 4:40:00 PM
If you did not post your names before your respective works, it would have been very difficult to determine who wrote what here. Both entries appear so much alike in descriptiveness and rhyming. You two have performed together admirably.
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Date: 2/18/2011 2:56:00 PM
Very well done , the both of you...
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Date: 2/18/2011 2:30:00 PM
MY 1st; a Re-post of a collaboration I did with Jimmy Anderson. He has it posted as well. Enjoy! Lay
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