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Beautiful Scars

Beautiful Scars We both were blessed with a prince, Apple of his mom's and dad's eye, No words to describe the pleasure of his first sight. Few months gone,doctor diagnosed a hole in his heart, Disheartened,distressed we took him to Madras, To give him a remedy paramount. Alas!! surgery snatched him, Anguish at its peak screamed, Ah!! why me? Consolations came to soothe my bruised heart, This is your exam,give your best,..survive.. Vicissitudes come,go with the flow. My empty wounded womb now, Cherishes happy memories of two years with him, Along with fortitude,patience,assurance,supplication. Following year GOD blessed me, With a healthier revised edition of my lost prince, An exemplary that most scars are beautiful,few ugly. Contest:Beautiful Scars Sponsor: Laura Urbaniak Poet:Rizwana Bhurani 22.11.2015 .

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Date: 11/28/2015 2:36:00 PM
Rizwana, Congratulations on your well-deserved win. Love SKAT
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Date: 11/26/2015 3:52:00 PM
From the depths of sadness you arose to heights of joy, Rizwana. Your faith and trust will help you through life. Congratulations on this fine win. // paul
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Rizwana Bhurani
Date: 11/27/2015 12:18:00 AM
thank you.....your poems are a joy to read...mostly encapsulated with a msg....let your pen flow on ...best wishes
Date: 11/26/2015 4:23:00 AM
Congrats on ur wonderful win Rizwana.. great pen!
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Rizwana Bhurani
Date: 11/27/2015 12:15:00 AM
thank you DOC,...best wishes
Date: 11/25/2015 6:06:00 AM
Thank you...wish you the same
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Date: 11/24/2015 7:19:00 PM
Very emotional and profound, Rizwana. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 11/24/2015 5:58:00 PM
congrats on your win Rizwana:-) hugs jan xx
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Rizwana Bhurani
Date: 11/25/2015 6:06:00 AM
Thnk you n yes...same to you
Date: 11/24/2015 5:29:00 PM
Rizwana...congrats on your win in my first contest! Very emotional and deep, thank you :)-lu *smiles*
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Rizwana Bhurani
Date: 11/25/2015 6:08:00 AM
Thnk you....best wishes
Date: 11/23/2015 7:55:00 AM
Scars of life are medals of bravery for battles won, dear Rizwana! Bravo! A seven. I welcome you dear new friend to our poetic family. Thank you for honoring me with your visit! God bless you!
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Rizwana Bhurani
Date: 11/23/2015 8:29:00 PM
Its a pleasure to receive your encouraging comments....m a beginner...feel free to correct me.....thank you

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