Beautiful Mystery

How deep is a wish from a falling star?
How soft the realm when two hearts give in?
A flash of light in a dark reservoir
When lovers find love in an Autumn wind
The star has awakened their restless soul
Like striking a match across darkened skies
Sensual wish less emotion's control
Beneath stars aloft come whispering sighs
In the dreams of the night, a trail was seen
To see a star flaming while souls embrace
Autumn winds blew as a star intervene
A gift, a wish, a vanquished star to trace
Beauty and mystery, a star's last cries
A beautiful mystery was her eyes


9/15/18 contest Beautiful Mystery
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Allison Avatar
September 29, 2018 at 3:36 AM
such a beautiful romantic poem Frederic, you really are a master sonneteer and excel at this form:-) many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx
Gauthier Avatar
September 28, 2018 at 11:58 AM
Lovely, Frederic. Congrats on your well deserved win.
Callus Avatar
September 27, 2018 at 8:42 AM
This is beautifully romantic, captivating and mysterious, Frederic. Congratulations on a most deserved win. Regards // paul
Barden Avatar
September 27, 2018 at 6:43 AM
Absolutely wonderful write, Frederic, and it's clear to see why it placed so highly! Congrats and blessings, my friend - great stuff! :-)
Warrior Avatar
September 26, 2018 at 1:58 PM
Congrats!!! my friend on your fine win...with this beautiful sonnet...love & light...^WW^
Hamilton Avatar
September 26, 2018 at 11:49 AM
Soo beautiful Frederic, congrats on a fine placement!
Wigley Avatar
September 22, 2018 at 2:03 AM
Fabulous, Frederic, and a fave for me, thanks. Regards, Viv
Dietrich Avatar
September 16, 2018 at 8:26 PM
wow, very beautiful, Frederic. I would not have expected any less from your sonneteer's pen!
Onclaud Avatar
September 16, 2018 at 1:05 PM
again, you fascinate with tender words and affectionate mood, frederic...so lovely!..huggs
Sands Avatar
September 15, 2018 at 5:21 PM
Very nice Frederic! I enjoyed this today :)
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 15, 2018 at 5:20 PM
This is gorgeous Frederic! "When lovers find love in an Autumn wind". Your romantic imagery makes me swoon! : )
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