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Beautiful Girl

Shhh... My mom She whispers Remember this My beautiful girl And listen very close My most important advice Especially when you feel down Is to never go and change yourself For the people who will not change for you. ———————————————————————— May 1, 2019 Writing Challenge 2- April 2019- It's All About 10 - Poetry Contest Sponsor: Dear Heart

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Gordon Mcconnell
Date: 5/13/2021 1:37:00 PM
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Great write and great advice Briauna, Keep on it!
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Honestly J.T.
Date: 2/28/2021 10:56:00 AM
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Cool poem; -JT
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James Inman
Date: 2/10/2021 8:26:00 PM
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Well said, Briauna, and well written. I really enjoy Etherees.
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Rob Levasseur
Date: 12/30/2020 8:49:00 AM
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Well I think better for us all to accept each other than to change for anyone. Very thought provoking and enjoyable read.
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Peter Dome
Date: 11/22/2020 12:14:00 PM
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Excellent and so right. well done. hope you won. Pete.
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Briauna Brown
Date: 12/23/2020 5:01:00 PM
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Just now logging in and am taken back by your comment. You happened to comment on the same day as my mother’s birthday!
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Mahtab Bangalee
Date: 11/22/2020 1:49:00 AM
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really it's beautiful to read
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Briauna Brown
Date: 12/23/2020 5:01:00 PM
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Just now logging in and seeing this. You happened to comment on the same day as my mother’s birthday!
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Sanjay Karmakar
Date: 2/8/2020 7:11:00 AM
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Great advice presented nicely. Wish all the best dear poet. regards.
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Gordon Mcconnell
Date: 1/5/2020 9:32:00 AM
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Briauna, this is great advice from your wise Mum. Keep on spilling the ink!
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Jc Hawkens
Date: 12/31/2019 7:29:00 AM
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I love this!! What sage wisdom that none of us should ignore. Nicely written and congrats on your win.
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Robert Lindley
Date: 5/30/2019 8:55:00 PM
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Love it and such wisdom is tho be appreciated and obeyed.
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Paul Callus
Date: 5/7/2019 1:46:00 PM
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That is wise advice from a mother to her daughter, Briauna. ~ Congratulations on your fine win! Regards // paul
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Briauna Brown
Date: 5/7/2019 3:20:00 PM
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Wise indeed! Thank you!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 5/7/2019 6:38:00 AM
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Sweet. Congrats on your win, Briauna. Well done.
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Briauna Brown
Date: 5/7/2019 3:19:00 PM
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Thank you, thank you!
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Constance La France
Date: 5/6/2019 2:24:00 PM
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Brianna, congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this beautifully penned piece!
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Briauna Brown
Date: 5/7/2019 3:18:00 PM
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Thank you, I appreciate your comment!
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John Gondolf
Date: 5/4/2019 8:15:00 AM
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Nicely written, Briauna, wonderful advice. John
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Briauna Brown
Date: 5/4/2019 4:17:00 PM
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Thank you, John! I appreciate your constant positivity!

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