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Beautiful Girl

Shhh...
                      My mom
                   She whispers
                 Remember this
                My beautiful girl
              And listen very close
           My most important advice
        Especially when you feel down
     Is to never go and change yourself
For the people who will not change for you.


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May 1, 2019
Writing Challenge 2- April 2019- It's All About 10 - Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Dear Heart

Copyright © Briauna Brown | Year Posted 2019

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Gordon Mcconnell Date: 5/13/2021 1:37:00 PM Great write and great advice Briauna, Keep on it! Login to Reply

Honestly J.T. Date: 2/28/2021 10:56:00 AM Cool poem; -JT Login to Reply

James Inman Date: 2/10/2021 8:26:00 PM Well said, Briauna, and well written. I really enjoy Etherees. Login to Reply

Rob Levasseur Date: 12/30/2020 8:49:00 AM Well I think better for us all to accept each other than to change for anyone. Very thought provoking and enjoyable read. Login to Reply

Peter Dome Date: 11/22/2020 12:14:00 PM Excellent and so right. well done. hope you won. Pete. Login to Reply Briauna Brown Date: 12/23/2020 5:01:00 PM Just now logging in and am taken back by your comment. You happened to comment on the same day as my mother’s birthday!

Mahtab Bangalee Date: 11/22/2020 1:49:00 AM really it's beautiful to read Login to Reply Briauna Brown Date: 12/23/2020 5:01:00 PM Just now logging in and seeing this. You happened to comment on the same day as my mother’s birthday!

Sanjay Karmakar Date: 2/8/2020 7:11:00 AM Great advice presented nicely. Wish all the best dear poet. regards. Login to Reply

Gordon Mcconnell Date: 1/5/2020 9:32:00 AM Briauna, this is great advice from your wise Mum. Keep on spilling the ink! Login to Reply

Jc Hawkens Date: 12/31/2019 7:29:00 AM I love this!! What sage wisdom that none of us should ignore. Nicely written and congrats on your win. Login to Reply

Robert Lindley Date: 5/30/2019 8:55:00 PM Love it and such wisdom is tho be appreciated and obeyed. Login to Reply

Paul Callus Date: 5/7/2019 1:46:00 PM That is wise advice from a mother to her daughter, Briauna. ~ Congratulations on your fine win! Regards // paul Login to Reply Briauna Brown Date: 5/7/2019 3:20:00 PM Wise indeed! Thank you!

Line Gauthier Date: 5/7/2019 6:38:00 AM Sweet. Congrats on your win, Briauna. Well done. Login to Reply Briauna Brown Date: 5/7/2019 3:19:00 PM Thank you, thank you!

Constance La France Date: 5/6/2019 2:24:00 PM Brianna, congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this beautifully penned piece! Login to Reply Briauna Brown Date: 5/7/2019 3:18:00 PM Thank you, I appreciate your comment!

John Gondolf Date: 5/4/2019 8:15:00 AM Nicely written, Briauna, wonderful advice. John Login to Reply Briauna Brown Date: 5/4/2019 4:17:00 PM Thank you, John! I appreciate your constant positivity!