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Beautiful Fall -Acrostic

Birds flying away, scattering greyish skies
Ebullient landscapes changing with sunrise
Autumn arriving briskly with chilling air
Umbrellas opening yelling November beware
Trees undressing with full colors displaying
Illusive temperatures plummeting and staying
Falling leaves mastering paintings, Van Gogh
Underground creatures are sleeping below
Layered attire the welcoming fashioned show

Flavoring pumpkin-pies admits porches sitting
Ambient acoustics within rapid rains spitting
Labor Days relaxing before open schooling
Leading equinox of September tools cooling.


...can also be read backward


Skies greyish, scattering away flying birds
Sunrise with changing landscapes, ebullient
Air chilling briskly with arriving Autumn
Beware, November yelling opening umbrellas
Displaying colors full, with undressing trees
Staying and plummeting temperatures illusive
Van Gogh paintings mastering leaves falling
Below sleeping are creatures underground
Show fashioned, welcoming the attire layered

Sitting porches admits pumpkin-pies flavoring
Spitting rains rapid within acoustics ambient
Schooling opening before relaxing days labor
Cooling tools, September of equinox leading.




Sept.06.2018
Beautiful fall Poetry
Sponsored by: John Hamilton


Placed 2'nd

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 9/18/2018 10:09:00 AM
How talented you are. Poetry at its best. Blew me away, WW ~Peace Warren.
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Date: 9/16/2018 1:58:00 PM
Brilliantly penned, WW. "Can be read backwards" - wow !!!!
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Date: 9/15/2018 12:27:00 PM
Beautiful is the fall, and your words hold such beauty. Congratulations on this win. :) Brandy
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Date: 9/15/2018 6:24:00 AM
Good Morning Winged. Not that I pay attention to reviews by others because I prefer to have my own opinion thoughts and words however I agree with Connie of this taking time and talent. Autumn is amazing and you described her and her essence. I see you placed second place which is marvelous. Congratulation. Thank you for sharing your talent. May this day find you well.
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Date: 9/15/2018 5:33:00 AM
My jaw just dropped!
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Date: 9/14/2018 10:08:00 PM
Now this takes time and real talent WW! Very impressive! Congratulations on your deserving high placement my friend! : )
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Date: 9/14/2018 9:58:00 PM
CONGRATS to win. Best Wishes
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Date: 9/14/2018 8:14:00 PM
Show off:) Congratulations old buddy on a most impressive poem. Hoping you are well.
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Date: 9/14/2018 2:05:00 PM
Masterful writing WW in your singular style, now with a reversible poem, congrats on another fine win!
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Date: 9/8/2018 8:18:00 PM
Your words take shape, when your thoughts dance along the page. This is beautiful in so many ways. ~ Brandy
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Date: 9/7/2018 10:12:00 AM
You display such limber poetic dexterity, my dear Wicked Warrior.. :) whether it's read forwards or backwards, your poem is a beauty to behold and full of your special kind of magic. Now, stop being such a show-off.. lol! Warmest wishes always, your twis sis <3
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Date: 9/6/2018 2:17:00 PM
WW, this piece really reflects the awesome beauty of Fall and paints a priceless picture! Love this lovely acrostic and I'm sure John will too! Best wishes in the contest, my friend! Love and hugs. Pandita
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Date: 9/6/2018 11:45:00 AM
You are brilliant WW. I think I may have said that before! Beautifully and masterfully done :) Have a great day!
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Date: 9/6/2018 12:29:00 PM
Thank you, my beautiful friend...the Angels smile upon you...love & light...^WW^

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