Beautiful Days

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_{This shape poem is supposed to be a flower about to bud; was hoping to create a daffodil bud. Not sure if I accomplished either. Perhaps 'Shape' poems are not my forte. Oh, well. Hope you enjoy the poem anyway.}

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ spring temperature warm after snow fades away color returns, grey dissipates yellow daffodils emerge within grass leaves on trees have begun to grow back bees buzz contently, their tummies packed pollen is plentiful, extracted from antlers animals, insects, attracted to aromas vanilla, sweets, whiffs from stomas hummingbirds fee from the azaleas with the wind, the flowers wave their petals sway the beauty of nature is portrayed spring entails beautiful days

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Tom Cunningham

Date: 3/22/2024 9:26:00 AM

Love the creative layout of your verse Sara, in a few more weeks we'll be basking in sunshine. Tom

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/22/2024 6:06:00 PM

thanks for your kind words, Tom. I'm looking forward to sunshiny days ahead. March as been fickle...warm one day, cold the next and dreary with rain. Sigh. Have a great evening, Sara

Vijay Pandit

Date: 3/22/2024 6:27:00 AM

Very creative, Sara. Beautiful images of spring skillfully delivered. Much enjoyed the inspiration you convey.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/22/2024 6:05:00 PM

thank you, Vijay. Glad you found my imagery beautiful and my poem inspirational. I appreciate you. Sara

Ink Empress

Date: 3/22/2024 5:11:00 AM

Awwn so beautiful it is sweet sara. I tried a shape poem once too, and i think whatever you do, whichever form, you nail them, you are truly an artistic soul that weaves words and soulful magic that resonates and touches the hearts of so many readers. Absolutely loved readinv this seasonal and uplifting poem. Beauty of nature i remember when i read this. Sending you light

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/22/2024 6:04:00 PM

Your comments always lift me up, dearest Ink. You're a wonderful 'fan' and 'cheerleader' for my artistic soul. Color me grateful for you and your wonderful, giving spirit. Enjoy your weekend, Sara

Paige Hind

Date: 3/21/2024 8:01:00 PM

Love the rhyming with the shape- you did well to me!

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/22/2024 3:54:00 AM

ahhh, thanks. You're most kind. Have a splendid Friday! hugs, Sara