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Beautiful Day

I smiled at the world The sun surrounded with blue Wildflowers and tall grasses Releasing the morning dew I could sense the day so new Walking the riverbank Feeling love from nature What a beautiful adventure As the day passed by The sun rose high The flight of butterflies and bees I dropped to me knees Thank you Amen

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 8/15/2019 6:11:00 PM
Hello Neil, yes that would be a beautiful day.Have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 8/13/2019 9:51:00 AM
A beautiful day and beautiful poem filled with gratitude :) and a Fav!
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Niall Fulham
Date: 8/13/2019 2:43:00 PM
Hi Heidi, thank you for your comment my friend::))Hugs
Date: 8/10/2019 5:38:00 AM
Lovely poem, Niall.
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Niall Fulham
Date: 8/12/2019 4:30:00 PM
Hi Line, thank you my friend glad you enjoyed::)))Hugs
Date: 8/10/2019 12:43:00 AM
Can just picture the scene Niall, yes we should be grateful for the wonders of creation. Tom
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Niall Fulham
Date: 8/12/2019 4:29:00 PM
Hi Tom, Thank you for comment my friend , yes we all should be grateful indeed ::))))
Date: 8/9/2019 9:56:00 PM
Hi Niall, How lovely, I am smiling and I am so delighted you are writing again. Frances
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Niall Fulham
Date: 8/12/2019 4:25:00 PM
Hi Frances, thank you so much for your encouragement my friend:)))Hugs
Date: 8/9/2019 6:58:00 PM
it certainly sounds divine Niall no wonder you are smiling:- hugs jan xx
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Niall Fulham
Date: 8/12/2019 4:23:00 PM
Hi Jan, Lovely place my friend, I could write a lot of poems about this walking area.::))))Hugs

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