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Beautiful, But Fragile

Flowers are beautiful to see to feel but they are short-lived for they wither fast Relationships are beautiful to cherish to nourish but they break apart if care is not taken Art is beautiful it brings wonder in its splendour but not all can understand its real worth Glass is beautiful in its pattern as a lantern but it shatters to smithereens when dropped down Icicles are beautiful in the caves near the waves but a little sunshine and they melt away to nothing Life is beautiful to enjoy and employ oneself in good works for soon it will end Everything is beautiful in its own way but does not stay forever the same for beauty is fragile. 30th July, 2016

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Date: 9/30/2016 1:31:00 PM
Jo congratulations on your win with this beautiful poem ~
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Date: 9/29/2016 10:44:00 PM
Jo Daniel, Congratulations on your awesome win. Stop by my latest Blog "Beautiful, But Fragile" if you'd like. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 9/30/2016 1:44:00 AM
Thank you, Linda:) am honoured:) will sure stop by:) all glory be to God:)
Date: 8/2/2016 6:11:00 PM
A beautiful write Jo, a combo of free verse and acrostic, very inventive style. You just keep them coming out, like on a production line, in a beauty factory.
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Date: 8/2/2016 6:44:00 AM
A beauty Jo. Every time we look in a mirror. Every time we take pride in our children. Vanity is every where. You are so right.
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Date: 8/2/2016 5:44:00 AM
Agreed. But the beauty of your poem can perhaps sustain itself ...
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Date: 8/2/2016 2:51:00 AM
I think this is really lovely Jo...especially what you wrote about art, so aptly put! 7 ; )
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