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~Beautiful Evening~ ( Double Tanka ) Beautiful evening Moon rises in the night sky The clouds starts to hide Begin to see bright stars too Relax, another day is done Beauty every day Beautiful night displays moon Magical brushwork The Creator do it all God paints night beautifully. Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2015
June.08.2016

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Date: 6/9/2016 4:24:00 AM
"Magical brushwork" - nice line:) Your words reflect God's beauty as found in nature so well:)
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Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 6/10/2016 9:24:00 PM
Thank you ever so kindly Jo,for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.Deeply appreciated.Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In his light God bless you!:)D

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