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Beautiful Evening - the Tanka Style

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~Beautiful Evening~ ( Double Tanka ) Beautiful evening The moon rises in the night sky The clouds start to hide Begin see bright stars, dream Relax, another day is done Beauty every day Beautiful night displays moon Magical brushwork The Creator do it all God paints night beautifully. Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2015
July.18.2016 ~Author's Notes: The "Tanka" is a classic form of Japanese poetry and is related to the Haiku.

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Date: 7/19/2016 3:23:00 AM
divinely written with rich expressions, dorian...huggs
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Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 7/21/2016 12:01:00 AM
Thank you ever so kindly, Nette ,for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.Deeply appreciated.Wishing you a very lovely week!In his light God bless you!:)D

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