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Beautiful Mountain high prominent and majestic Fauna and Flora protected eclectic White cloud silently settling like a moth Table Mountain and its peerless table cloth Distant sails of a pleasure boat cruising by The sound of the waves the seagulls cry Bright red and yellow of a setting sun Caressing the horizon when day is done Winelands stretches of emerald green Air unpolluted hint of an aroma clean Sun embracing the vineyards at dawn Scarecrows security tattered and torn Rivers lush valleys gardens and trees Birds serenading the humming of bees Behold this jewel rare and bountiful The Cape and its synonym, “ Beautiful “

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Date: 7/26/2017 3:12:00 PM
truly beautiful. I really liked the line comparing it to a table cloth .Also the scarecrows security was clever! BIG congrats on your win.
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Anthony Vannelson
Date: 7/26/2017 4:15:00 PM
Thank you really appreciate your comment
Date: 7/25/2017 9:29:00 PM
This is my favorite among the finalist, congrats on your win Anthony.
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Anthony Vannelson
Date: 7/26/2017 4:11:00 PM
Thank you for the encouragement much appreciated
Date: 7/25/2017 7:51:00 PM
Congratulation on your win ~*
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Anthony Vannelson
Date: 7/26/2017 4:02:00 PM
Thank you
Date: 7/25/2017 3:31:00 PM
I like your poem very much. I'm still confused about the "ABC" categorization, but nicely done.
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Anthony Vannelson
Date: 7/26/2017 4:20:00 PM
Thank you appreciate your comment, don't always know what form to use but I'm learning. Blessings
Date: 3/9/2017 12:56:00 AM
And another 7.....Beautiful imagery....I'm there.
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Anthony Vannelson
Date: 3/20/2017 12:38:00 AM
Dear Elizabeth I wrote young and strong as a tribute to my late wife( been just over a year now ). When I read it now, I include Weathering Grief its emotive, its real. I thank you.
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Anthony Vannelson
Date: 3/9/2017 1:03:00 PM
Thank you appreciate your kind comment

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