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Copyright Protected, ID 02-1705-556-08
All Rights Reserved, 2025, Constance La France
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Written, February 08, 2025
For the International Contest, Bitesize Contest No 100
Sponsor, Line Gauthie, Judged 02/16/2025

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I had come through the night to be with him, as rain, wild wind, and thunder boomed outside, and removing my dripping coat, I let my tangled raven wet hair fall . . . he clasped my head to his beating heart, as our tears came flowing down.

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John Read
Date: 2/8/2025 11:15:00 AM
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Two hearts beating as one united by love, wish you well in the contest Constance. xx
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Constance La France
Date: 2/10/2025 6:37:00 PM
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John, thank you for the compliment, appreciate ~
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/8/2025 9:00:00 AM
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I enjoyed reading your wonderful "beating hearts" write. "Good Luck" Enjoy your weekend..................
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Constance La France
Date: 2/8/2025 10:07:00 AM
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Paula, thank you for the compliment, and encouragement, appreciate ~

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