Beat the Clock

On the treadmill of time, who among us will ever beat the clock

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Jenish Somadas

Date: 4/1/2020 1:53:00 AM

Treadmill of time.. Great thought...Profound Monoku..

Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/1/2020 12:20:00 PM

'Profound' = This 'pro' found a thought... And remember: Pro backwards is Orp! Giggles, Gershon

John Lawless

Date: 3/31/2020 9:16:00 PM

I remember that game show Beat the Clock

Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/31/2020 9:49:00 PM

Ha, ha! Bud Collier was the M.C., as I recall... We're not showing our age; we're showing our superior memories!... Thanks for commenting, John, and stay healthy!! Cheers, Gershon

Jan Allison

Date: 3/31/2020 6:41:00 PM

super one liner GW, i intend to be around to see many more days weeks, years :-) hugs Jan xx

Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/31/2020 7:00:00 PM

Good for you. Let's all hang around for a long, long time. Thanks for the support, Jan! Cheers, Gershon

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 3/31/2020 6:29:00 PM

I'm not beating the clock, I am only milking it-

Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/31/2020 6:58:00 PM

Ha, ha, ha! -- Dairy Farmer Faulkner, milking the clock! ~ Tick-Tock

Kelli White

Date: 3/31/2020 6:07:00 PM

The cockroach ,they say they will survive us ull GW, love kelli

Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/31/2020 6:54:00 PM

Hail to the indestructible cockroach! Haha. Thanks, Kelli. Cheers, Gershon

Ronald D Thompson

Date: 3/31/2020 5:26:00 PM

I reckon nobody! Great one liner Gershon. A one liner with so much depth of thought! Best...Ron :)

Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/31/2020 6:53:00 PM

Ooh! Thanks for the enthusiasm, Ron. Here's to your good health! :) Gershon