Bearer of the Wine

Into my mind, a muse is wont to slip. Capriciously she comes to visit me. She brings exotic wine that I might sip. I then reanimate with poetry. She glides on tiny noiseless slippered feet to catch me unaware by night or day, and swiftly I imbibe her liquid sweet, for never do I know how long she’ll stay! Too well I know before I’ve had my fill, the drink shall be withdrawn. She’ll leave my head, and when she’s fled, my brain grows cold and still. I clutch the verses left me in her stead. Forevermore, I pray, may I be graced by her who bears the wine I long to taste.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 11/18/2020 5:37:00 PM
I wrote in a Soupmail to you about this one after reading it in Friendship Garden, in fact, this was my favorite poem of yours in that book. I just love how you characterize your muse as an enchantress capriciously bearing a glass of wine to inspire you to write. Awesome sonnet, my friend!
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Date: 12/9/2017 4:05:00 PM
Congratulations on your well-deserved win, Andrea - keep up the wonderful writing, my friend! :-)
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Date: 12/2/2017 1:13:00 AM
Love it Andrea. Congrats on your high placement.
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Date: 11/27/2017 7:59:00 AM
Fantastic metaphoric treatment of the theme Andrea, well done....love the final couplet..
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Date: 11/26/2017 11:54:00 PM
Marvelous write, Andrea, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 11/26/2017 4:21:00 PM
Beautiful, Andrea. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 12/17/2016 7:19:00 PM
You are blessed by her, that is for sure. Congratulations, Andrea. ...Fran
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Date: 12/16/2016 8:37:00 PM
A 7 for this delightful, appealing WINNING poem, Andrea. Janice
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Date: 12/16/2016 7:18:00 PM
A lovely description of your muse. Congratulations.
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Date: 9/11/2013 6:51:00 AM
I love this Sonnet. I love the imagery. I must try to find a muse among my wines now.
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Date: 9/5/2012 9:06:00 AM
Hey, this is wonderful Andrea, your sonnets should be inmortalized and perserved for ever. your indepth knowledge of sensitivity is your strength, as is your free spirit let no one take that away, it is god given.
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Date: 8/19/2012 10:16:00 AM
Good Morning Andrea!Thanks a LOT for your inspiring words at my haiku page.nO Spandan is not posting poems now..He is so busy with his studies.I will sure let you know if he posts a poem.
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Date: 7/31/2012 3:04:00 PM
As long as it's a dry, rich red, I'll accept it anytime!
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Date: 7/3/2012 10:54:00 AM
and LANGUAGE!
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Date: 7/3/2012 10:53:00 AM
SPECTACULAR! This sonnet has EVERYTHING, and more... flow, rhyme, enjambment, imagery and ATMOSPHERE! I am in awe... Keith
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Date: 6/30/2012 3:15:00 PM
Congrats on your winning work..Sara
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Date: 6/29/2012 1:15:00 PM
Congratulations on your 1st Place win in Cyndi's "Great Soup Release" contest Andrea. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/29/2012 11:19:00 AM
Andrea, congrats on your win.excellent...David
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Date: 6/28/2012 7:27:00 PM
great poem
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Date: 6/28/2012 6:43:00 PM
congrats Andrea on a grand first place win for this magnificent entry luv.. the title is so amazing too.. just spok to Constance again.. shwe is feeling great.. will be home July 7th..and hopefully back on PS same day .. wow..
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Date: 6/25/2012 3:36:00 PM
Well lets have a glass of wine and let the muse flow. ha ha We are heading on holidays so will be gone this week. My sister in law drinks red wine from the Niagara Falls area so will be having wine with our suppers. love phyl
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Date: 6/24/2012 9:11:00 AM
The sweet taste of wine, a beautiful expressed poem,nice in form, I enjoyed reading it.God bless you, Hugs!Erich
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Date: 6/21/2012 1:53:00 PM
Wonderful poem of creativity. Best wishes from bl. Thanks
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Date: 6/20/2012 12:34:00 PM
In mine depths dear poet ! Awesome write Andrea ! And Noah and I are doing wonderful, we thank you ! Have a splendid week my friend ! Much love, james
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Date: 6/20/2012 12:35:00 AM
your muse mystifies, andie... i wish i were there to get this piece from the teachers' boxes... :) huggs!
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