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'When things get difficult remember who you are.'
'Who am I?'
asked the boy
'You are loved'
said the horse

- Charlie Mackesy

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A Sam Scott poem:
29th March 2024
A poem for all bear lovers
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There once was a bear Who was loved for his shoes To a girl he was gifted Just her cuddly muse On a once rainy day With a shelter required The brolly was shaken To it's cover retired Then a browse through the store With her eyes shining bright The gloss of his footwear Caught a beam of the light A flash and a sparkle Was all that it took So a friendship was forged That no force could unhook As they travelled together Through the sun and the rain Their companionship moulded By life's tough terrain So the girl became woman Then a grandma and such.. The bear became gifted And was loved, not so much Then one day, for some reason His world became dark In the silence he longed For the girl and her spark After years it seemed, waiting One day it occurred There was light and a voice Of encouraging word "I love him", she said And he knew it was true Despite fur slightly flattened Or less sparkly shoe He remembered way back To the dusty old shop Once that love lives inside you It's a heart that won't stop

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024




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Date: 4/10/2024 3:38:00 AM
A story well told of a friendship of gold, I enjoyed the read
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Date: 4/10/2024 4:32:00 AM
Thanks so much Joseph! :)
Date: 4/8/2024 2:03:00 PM
I've never had a bear of my own, Sam, but I've bought for others because I just know how much happiness they are capable of bringing. Incidentally two dear persons in my life call me Pookie Bear, and I would not have it any other way lol! I love this write of yours, especially the end part. ~ Regards // paul
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Date: 4/8/2024 8:14:00 PM
What great synergy, Paul! Glad you enjoyed the poem.. I had fun. Sam :)
Date: 4/7/2024 7:59:00 PM
So poignant, Sam. Such a heart-melting narrative taking us readers on a gentle roller-coaster of an affair. Kudos, Gershon
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Date: 4/5/2024 12:36:00 PM
Hi Sam! Great to meet you. This is a special Fave for me,bcause i not only collect bears, but the Boyd’s Bears president called me in 1990’s & askedme to draw a series of pics for them. Go to fb pg: sally young-eslingerto see a few if u want to. “I’ve been draw & poetry sihce age 10 off & on. When did u start poetry?
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Date: 4/7/2024 11:17:00 PM
"You've got the words to change a nation But you're biting your tongue You've spent a life time stuck in silence Afraid you'll say something wrong If no one ever hears it how we gonna learn your song?" - Emile Sande https://youtu.be/Q03E7oTc5qo
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Date: 4/5/2024 3:48:00 PM
The noise in the background is the hustle and bustle of Manchester's Waterstones (said bookshop) cafe ;)
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Date: 4/5/2024 3:46:00 PM
Hey Sally, bless you for stopping by :) and for the FB link. I started writing in lockdown, inspired by a friend's picture and an Emile Sande song (Read All About It). I'll post the lyrics here. So glad you like it. I wrote this in a Bookshop inspired by a Donna Ashworth poem, from the book I bought while browsing :))
Date: 3/30/2024 7:20:00 PM
Definitely bear lovers, our nicknames are Cuddles Bear and Sugar Bear. I see commented just below me here. lol A FAV for my list, a fun story to read. A good one to read to the grandkids or great grandkids soon to be. The story moved along well, and the ending was pleasant. Have a happy Easter, Sam. Bill
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Date: 3/30/2024 10:08:00 PM
So sweet, your story, Bill. I am thrilled to think this poem may well be read and loved by Grandchildren; a fulfillment of it's very existence. Bless you both, you cuddly pair, thank you. Blessings and love <3 Sxx
Date: 3/29/2024 4:52:00 PM
What a lovely story, so kind and filled with childhood companionship. I mean this as a compliment. Your poem reminds a little of The Velveteen Rabbit, a story I cherish. I especially liked the touching last two lines of enduring and unconditional love. Am faving! enjoy your evening, Sara
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Date: 3/29/2024 8:27:00 PM
I will never grow tired of reading or receiving your wonderful comments, Sara x Your feedback is a great encouragement. Thank you :)) Bless you this Easter. Sx
Date: 3/29/2024 11:26:00 AM
I love the rhythm of this and the way youv done storytelling in such a poetic manner. Your way with writing is always creative and worth reading! I love the twist at the end and how light somehow comes despite time. This reminded me of my childhood too, when i used to have them teddy bears. Its beautiful nostalgic as well as refreshing! I think this might be one of my new faves from you! The melodious cadence and flow of this is impeccable! And so well articulated! Pleasure reading your work
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Date: 3/29/2024 4:08:00 PM
Dear Ink, what can I say? You bless me with your thoughtful words. I'm glad it transported you to an earlier time and fond memories. Blessings as you reclaim precious moments of childhood :))

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