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Beaming

look at me here
a moment in my past
I hardly recognize myself
looking radiant
beaming
sure of myself
I barely remember being
that young

my future’s
script unwritten
hopeful
optimistic
confident
there I am
before the scars of time



AP: 1st place 2021, 3rd place 2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Krutsinger Avatar
March 8, 2020 at 5:05 AM
What a gorgeous photo of you my friend! I wore my hair exactly that way in 1984. Love it and the poem.
Gauthier Avatar
March 8, 2020 at 6:28 AM
Thanks, Caren. Much appreciated.
Smith Avatar
March 4, 2020 at 12:36 PM
No scars in that ink, I like this one Line...
Gauthier Avatar
March 4, 2020 at 1:40 PM
Thanks, Charlie. Much appreciated.
Achilles Avatar
March 4, 2020 at 7:23 AM
I often look at old photo's and think is that really me?? was I ever really that young? Life- well written Line, Regards, Julie
Gauthier Avatar
March 4, 2020 at 7:28 AM
Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Julie.
Somadas Avatar
March 4, 2020 at 2:53 AM
Photos and now videos are the proofs of once being young.. I like the expression "before the scars of time".. Great write..
Gauthier Avatar
March 4, 2020 at 7:28 AM
Thanks, Jenish. Much appreciated.
Krutsinger Avatar
March 4, 2020 at 1:27 AM
Ah, what a terrific tribute to a life well-lived, my friend!
Gauthier Avatar
March 4, 2020 at 7:28 AM
Thanks, Caren. Much appreciated.
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