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Beach Huts

The sun has set 
and left me here

bones stretching out
towards the heart
of the heat

as my spine cracks
across the sand

I press my lips
together and
taste

the salt on
the air

the black mist on
the sea

the promise on the
wind that reassured me

that you’d come back
to me

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 6/22/2013 11:53:00 AM
about your poem: it is lovely and having your heart content is important.. love the shade and verse here...LINDA
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Date: 6/22/2013 11:52:00 AM
Hi Emma,, "Welcome to the poetry soup. I'm stopping by to invite you on over to my latest contest -- I'm hoping you will consider the enjoyment and challenges we offer on this site. Please consider my contest. You can find the contest page on the top left hand side. I’m looking forward in reading and enjoying your poems in the future. Today I will start by reading all you have posted this far.. Hoping to become a follower and a friend to your poems, and persona. Thanks @-> LINDA <-@"
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Date: 6/21/2013 8:36:00 AM
wow, almost like a dreamy sand castle first kiss SKAT
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Date: 6/21/2013 8:35:00 AM
Hi Emma, , Stopping by with a nice and sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup fan and "FRIEND"....... God Bless........... Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 6/20/2013 11:47:00 AM
Stunning lines here. May this setting of paradise last and with meaning.
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