Beach Brawl

In swim trunks, the balls were out.
Each one scored a mighty shout.
	digressed to a maul,
	in a beachside brawl
Winners were in serious doubt.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Ashley Avatar
July 27, 2025 at 8:21 AM
Hahaha! Dear Linda, your witty imagery is giggle-worthy! Warmest wishes, my humorous poet friend.. ~Susan
Fowler Avatar
July 27, 2025 at 8:27 AM
Thank you so much Susan! sending giggles your way :)
Etgen-Baker Avatar
July 22, 2025 at 4:46 PM
funny stuff...thanks for sending some humor my way!
Fowler Avatar
July 23, 2025 at 7:31 AM
Happy you enjoyed the humor Sara. Many thanks! :)
Allison Avatar
July 22, 2025 at 2:27 PM
lol thanks for the giggles Lina Alice:-) hugs Jan xx
Fowler Avatar
July 23, 2025 at 7:31 AM
Glad for the giggles Jan! Linda :)
Goldsmith Avatar
July 22, 2025 at 10:53 AM
What a creative/beach fun Limerick  write. Thanks for the laugh. Have a fun day writing away...............
Fowler Avatar
July 22, 2025 at 12:12 PM
Thank you Paula! :)
Lane Avatar
July 22, 2025 at 10:44 AM
Ha Linda... a swim trunk dilemma about beach balls.
Fowler Avatar
July 22, 2025 at 12:12 PM
;);) Thanks Lin :)
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