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Beach

The sea breeze 
Caresses the surf
Kissing my wet toes
While sweet roses waft
A symphony of waves 
Hypnotize my soul
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Carmack Avatar
October 7, 2024 at 2:54 AM
Takes me back to my times at the beach, glad and grateful to have them. Congrats on POTD.
Kitchin Avatar
October 7, 2024 at 4:54 AM
Rob, thank you.
M  Avatar
September 30, 2024 at 9:21 AM
Belated Congratulations Tania on POTD!! Six lines of tranquil loveliness!! Debx
Kitchin Avatar
September 30, 2024 at 2:58 PM
Deb, thank you.
George Avatar
September 16, 2024 at 1:42 AM
Hi Tania.... this is so lovely describing the loveliness of the symphony of waves and the sweetness of the caress of surf. It was a pleasure reading this miniature poem.
Kitchin Avatar
September 30, 2024 at 2:58 PM
Valsa, thank you.
Empress Avatar
September 8, 2024 at 6:59 AM
Dear tania, so serene and beautiful how youv described the beach, and how youv written “ sweet roses waft A symphony of waves ” love that! Soul warming and uplifting! Pleasure reading this. Sending you light always
Kitchin Avatar
September 8, 2024 at 7:02 AM
Ink, thank you.
Romios Avatar
September 8, 2024 at 3:57 AM
Hello Tania! I am late on signing thix lovely POTD you created. Indeed it is quite beautiful …I felt as though I were there right on the beach. The warm sand caressing my toes! Congratulations…Pangie
Kitchin Avatar
September 8, 2024 at 4:34 AM
Pangie, thank you.
Bowring Avatar
September 4, 2024 at 11:33 PM
Dear Tania, many congratulations for POTD with this beautiful write. It’s so captivating- so much captured within its few poetic lines. I love it - certainly “hypnotises” the soul and makes you really want to be there on the beach. So enjoyed it on this damp, gloomy morning. Thank you for sharing x :):)
Kitchin Avatar
September 5, 2024 at 3:07 AM
Christina, thank you.
One Avatar
September 4, 2024 at 10:42 PM
This is a lovely tender poem...I've never trolly been a sea and beach person..but you make it sound great...Congrats on POTD
Kitchin Avatar
September 5, 2024 at 3:07 AM
SO, thank you.
Nicole Avatar
September 4, 2024 at 6:49 PM
' A symphony of waves hypnotize my soul. ' This is my favorite thought within. Such a beautiful moment to behold, indeed. Congratulations Tania, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. :) Brandy
Kitchin Avatar
September 4, 2024 at 7:21 PM
Brandy, thank you.
Koplin Avatar
September 4, 2024 at 6:09 PM
Beautiful Tania! Congratulations my friend!!
Kitchin Avatar
September 4, 2024 at 7:21 PM
Mark, thank you.
Ray Choudhury Avatar
September 4, 2024 at 2:30 PM
Congratulations, Dear Tania, on this beautifully sensuous poem! Love imagining "Kissing my wet toes"!"Hypnotize" - such a great choice of word!
Kitchin Avatar
September 4, 2024 at 7:21 PM
Mala, thank you.
Slaughter Avatar
September 4, 2024 at 10:43 AM
I'm not a "beach" person, myself, but I do enjoy the imagery in this piece, Tania, and congrats on POTD, as well.
Kitchin Avatar
September 4, 2024 at 2:03 PM
Jim, thank you.
Goldsmith Avatar
September 4, 2024 at 8:34 AM
Back with Congratulations on your POTD win. I enjoyed reading your "Beach" write again. Have a blessed writing away..................
Kitchin Avatar
September 4, 2024 at 2:03 PM
Paula, thank you.
Rodrigues Avatar
September 4, 2024 at 7:34 AM
Lovely! Wonderful alliteration, sensual images and the sweet wafting roses, just the right touch! Congrats on POTD!
Kitchin Avatar
September 4, 2024 at 2:03 PM
Kim, thank you.
Canerdy Avatar
September 4, 2024 at 7:02 AM
Tania, your poem well deserves the title POTD~~great personification. Janice
Kitchin Avatar
September 4, 2024 at 7:30 AM
Janice, thank you.
Radice Avatar
September 4, 2024 at 6:24 AM
Loving the ambience of your poem. Congratulations on POTD. I have to ask..is that a greyhound next to you in your profile pic? Brilliant family pet. Cheers - Gary
Kitchin Avatar
September 4, 2024 at 6:36 AM
Gary, thank you and yes it is.
Kaufman Avatar
September 4, 2024 at 6:16 AM
Dear Tania, Lovely imagery in your POTD, Beach. Enjoy this well earned recognition for such a lovely write. Blessings
Kitchin Avatar
September 4, 2024 at 6:36 AM
Nancy, thank you.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
September 4, 2024 at 6:15 AM
My goodness, I wish I was there, a palpable penning! Congratulations on POTD, xomo!
Kitchin Avatar
September 4, 2024 at 6:36 AM
Mo, thank you.
Seeker Avatar
September 4, 2024 at 3:46 AM
Perfect poem for Line’s contest (if you enter) ~ warmest congratulations on POTD, Tania
Kitchin Avatar
September 4, 2024 at 6:37 AM
Unseeking, thank you and yes, I did enter it in her contest.
Kavanagh  Avatar
September 4, 2024 at 2:30 AM
Sounds like you’re on some desert island paradise Tania, imagine waking up to this beautiful scene you painted every morning! Congratulations on a wonderful POTD cheers David
Kitchin Avatar
September 4, 2024 at 3:43 AM
David, a pleasant surprise, thank you.
Elliott Avatar
September 4, 2024 at 2:02 AM
A most beautiful POTD, Tania. Enjoy your special poetry day. xox
Kitchin Avatar
September 4, 2024 at 3:43 AM
Gina, thank you.
Jones Avatar
September 4, 2024 at 1:52 AM
Back to say congratulations on your potd honor!
Kitchin Avatar
September 4, 2024 at 3:44 AM
Karen, thank you.
May Avatar
September 4, 2024 at 12:59 AM
The never ending symphony of the sea, Congrats on POTD Tania
Kitchin Avatar
September 4, 2024 at 3:44 AM
Joseph, thank you.
Mashina Avatar
September 4, 2024 at 12:43 AM
Congratulations on winning the Poem of the Day honor! Your beautiful depiction of the beach's serenity truly resonates and captures the essence of peace and nature. Well done!..Frank
Kitchin Avatar
September 4, 2024 at 6:38 AM
Frank, thank you.
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September 4, 2024 at 12:36 AM
Oh to be beside the sea, your words paint a lovely picture of one standing on the sea shore Tania. Congratulations on receiving the honour of poem of the day… Beryl
Kitchin Avatar
September 4, 2024 at 6:38 AM
Beryl, thank you.
Cunningham Avatar
September 4, 2024 at 12:31 AM
Back with congratulations to you Tania on today's POTD honour. Tom
Kitchin Avatar
September 4, 2024 at 6:38 AM
Tom, thank you.
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