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Unless grazed by blazing bliss, mind rules the heart Fickle thought forms vaporise, whence we are free There is nothing here within, save love and light All questions then cease Unshakable truths are those, untouched by time As we be breathed, recognise God’s light within Embrace, release, flow with ease, in this earth dream Know we are God’s child

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Date: 2/15/2025 6:27:00 PM
Comforting words of light! Amazing work !! Always, Laura
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Date: 2/15/2025 7:18:00 PM
Thank you, Laura
Date: 2/15/2025 5:28:00 PM
I really love how deep you dive in your poetry. Knowing we are God's child is the most important truth to recognize and embrace. Very nice poem!
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Date: 2/15/2025 6:27:00 PM
Thank you, Kath :)
Date: 2/15/2025 7:41:00 AM
Ahh such a profound poem once again from your very deep and eloquent quill dear seeker. I must quote “ Unshakable truths are those, untouched by time” what an impressive line! One that i wish i had written. I just love how youve written this. Not sure if ive tried this form but youv definitely nailed it for sure. Pleasure reading you always. Sending you light
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Date: 2/15/2025 8:45:00 AM
Thank you, IE. Far from nailing the form, I’m actually lost on stressed vs unstressed syllables, which Sapphic Stanza requires.

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