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Be Mine My Love For All Eternity

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Be mine my love for eternity He sits in his cozy chair, tired, and feeling very old, with broken wings, Feeling the effect of time lost and what inner self aging brings. “ Do you wish you were back at work with the old crew?”, I asked. “No. I haven’t the energy as I used to.” he replied. I scroll back the memories of this striking man a few years back When we were young, he stole my heart; we were so much in love He asked, “Be mine my love for eternity?" A soft gentle face with a smile full of love I would drown in his blue eyes and fade away to another world and journey my fingers around his blond curly hair and drawback Masculine arms that open to embrace his heart around my soul The life of a man so full of hope and energy for a vital spark With his boys in tow then later lay their heads upon his loving heart Although the self we knew is gone We cannot forgo That like aged wine our love still has that romantic allure Years later, in his chair, tired in mind and soul, dreaming of days past long ago I asked, " Be mine my love for eternity?
6/12/2016

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Date: 9/24/2016 2:26:00 PM
A sweet ode to Autumn love. Congrats, Eve. :-)
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Eve Roper
Date: 9/25/2016 3:47:00 PM
Thank you, Tom, true story this is my hubby and I Hugs
Date: 9/23/2016 10:39:00 AM
Sweetest Eve, we should all strive to love for eternity...congratulations on your placement and thank you for being a part of my contest :)-luloo
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Eve Roper
Date: 9/25/2016 3:46:00 PM
thank you so very much, Laura, for my placement I am honored Hugs Eve
Date: 6/14/2016 4:48:00 AM
Beautiful memories x great words xxx
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Eve Roper
Date: 6/14/2016 9:13:00 AM
Thank you, Wendy, the things we write when hubby and I are having a conversation. Hugs

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