Be Good Or Be Good At It

Say good morning to the cold bathroom floor-
mouthwash tastes like a reused mojito
vomit erupting from a molten core-
in the sink, fermented blood starts to show
from sacrament taken on Thursday night,
my last supper. Judas, feel what I feel-
whiskey nailed to a cross, my final fight. 
No more beer or tonics will make me kneel 
genuflected for a porcelain god-
today I will rise steady on two feet,
not carried by a bouncer as he plods
to a dented cab in a smoky side street
My dear friend, you dined silent at my side,
But under your thorns I cannot hide
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Nance Avatar
May 28, 2015 at 10:07 PM
oh i love the vivid descriptions. awesome writing
Lamoureux Avatar
May 14, 2015 at 7:31 AM
I enjoy the rawness of your work. You have skills.
A  Avatar
May 13, 2015 at 11:57 AM
Lora, wow.. I like the mention of Judas and how the last super came to be. Interesting write. SKAT
Robinson Avatar
May 13, 2015 at 3:15 PM
Thank you!
Macmillan Avatar
May 13, 2015 at 11:40 AM
:D Okay, sonneteer... love the bite in this one. It's a sonnet I'm having published... so many forms won't be touched by the journals, but sonnets? It's all the juice in the little box. They are here to stay. Love the volta. Girl is off with her dad for half an hour. Mom break. Nice to stop by here.
Robinson Avatar
May 13, 2015 at 3:14 PM
always lovely to have you here!
Dom Avatar
May 13, 2015 at 7:57 AM
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