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the murder above my head is biblical i know they fly and land and fly away to land somewhere out of sight out of mind but once a poetic bird watcher watched them become leaves on a long bare autumn tree bare for all had left before there we're talkies and everything was yin and yang with no discrimination in their blackness they became light like a feather less flight of fancy and imagery that will stay with me even if it was through someone else's eyes (Inspired by a poem by Maureen McGreavy)

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Date: 11/9/2019 7:59:00 PM
Wow! I inspired this! It's wonderful truly, my muse is as sluggish as me self and this is a warm welcome something I have not a word for. Thank you my friend, xomo
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Jeff Connelly
Date: 11/10/2019 1:38:00 PM
Thank you Maureen for the image of crows becoming leaves in your poem "Growing Dark". That image will stick with me forever...

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