Bavila Rivers Joined

when you reach 
two bavila rivers 
"Mugela and Mugadja "which 
were joined together 
to become Kalimabenge.
You witness how bavila 
people always wish
to live in peace with other
nations on their 
Land.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Rodrigues Avatar
December 30, 2023 at 7:08 PM
Very nice! Congratulations on POTD!
Warally Ngengethe Mussabwa Chris Avatar
December 31, 2023 at 2:39 AM
Thank you for your appreciation. You are welcome
M  Avatar
December 30, 2023 at 8:55 AM
An inspiring peaceful write Alfonso! Rivers join into one ….as should humans in peace!Congratulations on POTD!! Debx
Warally Ngengethe Mussabwa Chris Avatar
December 31, 2023 at 2:41 AM
Thank you for dropping nice words on this page before the end of 2023. You are welcome
Delaney Avatar
December 28, 2023 at 3:46 AM
When two rivers flow in peace. It’s a beautiful metaphor for how peace can be achieved. Belated Congratulations on POTD, SuZ
Warally Ngengethe Mussabwa Chris Avatar
December 28, 2023 at 5:54 AM
I agree with you Well said, Thank you for your nice comment on this poem. You are welcome
Nicole Avatar
December 27, 2023 at 7:16 PM
Two *different* rivers join together. I can't believe that nature is able to connect in a peaceful way, without words, while most humans refuse to even try. Your thoughts uplift and inspire. Congratulations Alfonso, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. ~ Brandy
Warally Ngengethe Mussabwa Chris Avatar
December 28, 2023 at 5:49 AM
Well developed It seems miracles of God to put them together. Thank you for Wonderful comment. You are welcome
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
December 27, 2023 at 2:32 PM
A most beautiful ode ushering your people cascading through your piece embracing peace, Alfonso. Cheers truly, with TPS' outreach to you with the honorary rarity of POTD, enjoining with a wealth of fellow writers in the world of poetry. Aloha from Hawaii, William.
Warally Ngengethe Mussabwa Chris Avatar
December 28, 2023 at 5:45 AM
Wow, Those important words deserve this best place. Thank you for this wise comment on this page. You are welcome
Baker Avatar
December 27, 2023 at 8:52 AM
Congratulations on your POTD, Alfonso! Enjoy your special day of recognition. Bill
Warally Ngengethe Mussabwa Chris Avatar
December 28, 2023 at 5:38 AM
Thank you for your compliment. You are welcome
Lawless Avatar
December 27, 2023 at 8:47 AM
and the mighty rivers fed by endless streams seeking fulfillment of such peace. This is a very intriguing and hauntingly beautiful write
Warally Ngengethe Mussabwa Chris Avatar
December 28, 2023 at 5:36 AM
Thank you for your special comment on this poem. You are welcome
Messina Avatar
December 27, 2023 at 7:49 AM
Alfonso, very nice..."Peace with other nations" A wonderful sentiment. Congratulations on POTD
Warally Ngengethe Mussabwa Chris Avatar
December 28, 2023 at 5:34 AM
Peace is a good thing. Thank for your concern. You are welcome
Ray Choudhury Avatar
December 27, 2023 at 5:52 AM
Wonderful! Your few lines carry a profound message for deep reflection. Congratulations on POTD!
Warally Ngengethe Mussabwa Chris Avatar
December 28, 2023 at 5:30 AM
Your wisdom speaks openly. Thanks for this kind comment of this page. You are welcome
Fowler Avatar
December 27, 2023 at 5:22 AM
Peace walk with you Alfonso. Congratulations on the honor of POTD. :)
Warally Ngengethe Mussabwa Chris Avatar
December 28, 2023 at 5:28 AM
I receive it , Thank you for stopping here and typing peaceful words. You are welcome
Jones Avatar
December 27, 2023 at 5:13 AM
Congratulations on a unique potd!
Warally Ngengethe Mussabwa Chris Avatar
December 28, 2023 at 5:25 AM
Well said. Thank you for your senseful comment. You are welcome
Kitchin Avatar
December 27, 2023 at 3:01 AM
Alfonso, the world needs more peace, congratulations on POTD!
Warally Ngengethe Mussabwa Chris Avatar
December 28, 2023 at 5:21 AM
Yes, Thanks for your concern You are welcome
Edmonds  Avatar
December 27, 2023 at 2:11 AM
A fine example of how to live in peace, the whole world should take heed, them maybe all horrors of war would cease. Congratulations on receiving the award for poem of the day. Enjoy the glory Alfonso… Belle
Warally Ngengethe Mussabwa Chris Avatar
December 28, 2023 at 5:20 AM
God did things which are above humans understandings. Thanks for wonderful words of encouraging. You are welcome
Cunningham Avatar
December 27, 2023 at 12:33 AM
The world needs to take a leaf out of their book and strive to live in peace with their neighbours. Congratulations Alfonso on the honour of POTD. A happy and peaceful new year to you. Tom
Warally Ngengethe Mussabwa Chris Avatar
December 28, 2023 at 5:15 AM
You speak the truth, Peace in needed in the World. Thank you for your wise words on this poem. You are welcome
Theraven Avatar
December 26, 2023 at 8:03 PM
Alf Chris, Such as it is, poetry in greatest rushing current' force. Your understanding in things of nature, especially human, seems long in years. Much like your distinguished name. Blessings for you in the new year Alfonso. -Richard
Warally Ngengethe Mussabwa Chris Avatar
December 28, 2023 at 5:13 AM
Thank you for this adorable comment on this creative. You are welcome
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