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BAVILA RIVERS JOINED

when you reach two bavila rivers "Mugela and Mugadja "which were joined together to become Kalimabenge. You witness how bavila people always wish to live in peace with other nations on their Land.

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Date: 12/30/2023 7:08:00 PM
Very nice! Congratulations on POTD!
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Date: 12/30/2023 8:55:00 AM
An inspiring peaceful write Alfonso! Rivers join into one ….as should humans in peace!Congratulations on POTD!! Debx
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Thank you for dropping nice words on this page before the end of 2023. You are welcome
Date: 12/28/2023 3:46:00 AM
When two rivers flow in peace. It’s a beautiful metaphor for how peace can be achieved. Belated Congratulations on POTD, SuZ
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I agree with you Well said, Thank you for your nice comment on this poem. You are welcome
Date: 12/27/2023 8:05:00 PM
written with depth and insight
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Date: 12/27/2023 7:16:00 PM
Two *different* rivers join together. I can't believe that nature is able to connect in a peaceful way, without words, while most humans refuse to even try. Your thoughts uplift and inspire. Congratulations Alfonso, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. ~ Brandy
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Well developed It seems miracles of God to put them together. Thank you for Wonderful comment. You are welcome
Date: 12/27/2023 2:32:00 PM
A most beautiful ode ushering your people cascading through your piece embracing peace, Alfonso. Cheers truly, with TPS' outreach to you with the honorary rarity of POTD, enjoining with a wealth of fellow writers in the world of poetry. Aloha from Hawaii, William.
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Wow, Those important words deserve this best place. Thank you for this wise comment on this page. You are welcome
Date: 12/27/2023 8:52:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD, Alfonso! Enjoy your special day of recognition. Bill
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Date: 12/27/2023 8:47:00 AM
and the mighty rivers fed by endless streams seeking fulfillment of such peace. This is a very intriguing and hauntingly beautiful write
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Date: 12/27/2023 7:49:00 AM
Alfonso, very nice..."Peace with other nations" A wonderful sentiment. Congratulations on POTD
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Peace is a good thing. Thank for your concern. You are welcome
Date: 12/27/2023 6:23:00 AM
Beautiful sentiment for the day Al
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Thank you for your wise message. You are welcome
Date: 12/27/2023 5:52:00 AM
Wonderful! Your few lines carry a profound message for deep reflection. Congratulations on POTD!
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Your wisdom speaks openly. Thanks for this kind comment of this page. You are welcome
Date: 12/27/2023 5:22:00 AM
Peace walk with you Alfonso. Congratulations on the honor of POTD. :)
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I receive it , Thank you for stopping here and typing peaceful words. You are welcome
Date: 12/27/2023 5:13:00 AM
Congratulations on a unique potd!
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Well said. Thank you for your senseful comment. You are welcome
Date: 12/27/2023 3:53:00 AM
congrats on your POTD with its timely message about peace. Well done.
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Date: 12/27/2023 3:01:00 AM
Alfonso, the world needs more peace, congratulations on POTD!
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Yes, Thanks for your concern You are welcome
Date: 12/27/2023 2:11:00 AM
A fine example of how to live in peace, the whole world should take heed, them maybe all horrors of war would cease. Congratulations on receiving the award for poem of the day. Enjoy the glory Alfonso… Belle
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God did things which are above humans understandings. Thanks for wonderful words of encouraging. You are welcome
Date: 12/27/2023 12:33:00 AM
The world needs to take a leaf out of their book and strive to live in peace with their neighbours. Congratulations Alfonso on the honour of POTD. A happy and peaceful new year to you. Tom
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You speak the truth, Peace in needed in the World. Thank you for your wise words on this poem. You are welcome
Date: 12/26/2023 8:03:00 PM
Alf Chris, Such as it is, poetry in greatest rushing current' force. Your understanding in things of nature, especially human, seems long in years. Much like your distinguished name. Blessings for you in the new year Alfonso. -Richard
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