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Battlefields

"Battlefields" Life is a battlefield we have no choice in choosing our wars they come to us like magnets eventually fate plays its thorns we wear its crown there is no strategy except that of surviving or turning in all our cards the days we play and like to number the needle of that sweet jazz record repeats our glitches the mother be our moon and stars she swears sweet revenge each of us by name through blood we ferociously deny our combat entrance but oh hear our sturdy arrival cry victorious and recalcitrant battlefield faces of the children coming in fresh washed and worn, little deaths just before the dawn eventually open the door the desks all aligned but it’s never sweet nor neat in war disordered we entreat all numbered for our lessons silence like murder settles in hustling new fangs for blood replace the novice milk teeth (LadyLabyrinth / 2022) "the moon through the trees"/ XavieRinato https://youtu.be/86cJsFUT6Tw 7 https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Symbolism_of_the_number_7

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Date: 1/21/2022 1:20:00 PM
You are so right when you say, "The most important 6 inches on the Battlefield, is between your ears." "Years ago everyone had common sense. Then many had book sense. Today no one has any sense. Everyone has gone crazy." I am working on a write about this. Have a great day/weekend...............
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 1/21/2022 3:40:00 PM
true...and for some six inches is less than ideal, but enough to get you into a whole lot of trouble. ;)
Date: 1/21/2022 1:38:00 AM
"The most important 6 inches on the Battlefield, is between your ears."
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Date: 1/21/2022 1:37:00 AM
"Do you know what would hold me together on a battlefield? The sense that I was perpetuating the language in which Keats and the rest of them wrote." Wilfred Owen
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 1/21/2022 1:39:00 AM
"Love is a Battlefield". Benatar.

Book: Reflection on the Important Things