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Battle of Egos

This- This tableau of Mental images, of Fixed scenes, this “Battle of Egos” is Relentlessly looping In my mind. An annual gathering of kith and kin Created a backdrop of statue-like characters Blindly unaware of a Crisis stirring. Off to the side, there are the mothers, Pillars of love for their sons, Paralyzed with the knowledge that they are helpless, Helpless as they watch The conflict unfolding. There- There are the Fathers and Sons- Distant and deaf to each other, who, in their inability to Set aside their own sense of rightness and wrongness, Reach a point of no return. A plea, from one, is given, but seen as a Challenge from the other, and the whole Facade of civility collapses. With faces frozen and actions rigid, Rage and resolve coalesce. Fearful and dauntless, fathers confront sons and sons their fathers, and in that absolute moment Familial roles shift. Everything - everything is different, yet Nothing changes. Rooted and unmoved, egos remain. So much is lost. Nothing- Nothing is gained.

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Date: 6/20/2023 11:56:00 PM
Wow, I wish this poem would be sent to all families, especially where ego reign supreme. "A plea, from one, is given, but seen as a Challenge from the other, and the whole Facade of civility collapses." What a powerful message.
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Date: 2/13/2021 8:59:00 PM
A pleasure to find your lovely poem published in the 2020 PS Anthology, Michelle ~
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Date: 6/25/2018 1:37:00 AM
wow.....love this I love how you can interpret the meaning of words based on your experiences as the reader!
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Michelle Waters
Date: 6/25/2018 9:21:00 AM
As a writer, I have always had the goal of somehow connecting with my audience. Thank you for your response!
Date: 6/23/2018 10:59:00 PM
Michelle, such a strong and emotive write.. makes one think.......
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Michelle Waters
Date: 6/25/2018 9:19:00 AM
Thank you. I’m pleased to know it makes one think. For me, that is why I write.

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