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Monday, my wife and I went out for a walk in the full moon of October. At one point
we stopped, and she turned to look up at the moon, as if in a dream, I saw her...
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Bathed


hidden, I watched — the full moon gathered only for her as October softened, she bathed, beauty
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Dietrich Avatar
October 23, 2025 at 10:14 AM
How did I never catch this one? Gorgeous one for your wife
Sharma Avatar
October 20, 2025 at 9:42 PM
A beautiful admiration of timeless bond and beauty....
Jones Avatar
October 15, 2025 at 7:37 PM
This is beautiful! I love the imagery and passion!
Rodgers Avatar
October 16, 2025 at 6:07 AM
Dear Karen, such a joy to read your note this morning, and I am thankful for your lovely visit. Autumn Blessings, Dear Karen, Daniel
Hamilton Avatar
October 15, 2025 at 9:46 AM
a truly lovely poem to your wife you so clearly love her very much Daniel ty for your visit to my page hugs Shadow
Rodgers Avatar
October 16, 2025 at 6:07 AM
Dear Shadow, thank you for your lovely note. Walking with my wife under that October moon led to so many poetic thoughts. Autumn Blessings, Dear Shadow, Daniel
Wolf Avatar
October 12, 2025 at 7:48 PM
'Only for her:' Perfect! :) gw
Rodgers Avatar
October 15, 2025 at 9:03 AM
Hello Gershon, I always feel that the Lord gave me my wife, who has blessed me in so many ways. Over the 45 years of knowing her, she has been the focus of well over 100 poems during that time. Autumn Blessings, Gershon, Daniel
Winter Avatar
October 12, 2025 at 6:04 PM
Dearest Daniel, this is the most beautiful piece of writing I've ever read! So beautifully written! With love and respect always, Anne
Rodgers Avatar
October 15, 2025 at 9:02 AM
Dearest Anne, I am always lifted up by your words and thankful. Autumn Blessings, Dearest Anne, Daniel
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October 10, 2025 at 10:49 AM
Dear Daniel! The images you have painted with your words are as mesmerizing as being moonstruck! This is so tender while your words caress your wife and this reader. There is such a sense of serene beauty in the picture and your words. Thank you for capturing this moment with your poetic artistry! Sending you autumn blessings of joy, dear friend!
Rodgers Avatar
October 15, 2025 at 9:01 AM
Dear Sam, The October Full moon, going for a walk at night with my wife/muse, brings forth creativity in many different ways. Thank you, my friend, for your note. Autumn Blessings, Dear Sam, Daniel
Godwin Avatar
October 10, 2025 at 10:22 AM
I love the pic and notes and poem - what a package, all three are beautiful and together, breathtaking ...
Rodgers Avatar
October 15, 2025 at 9:00 AM
Dear CayCay, thank you, my friend. When your spouse is your muse, they become enchanting in every way. Autumn Blessings, Dear CayCay, Daniel
Gauthier Avatar
October 9, 2025 at 6:21 PM
lovely ~ what a beautiful brevity
Rodgers Avatar
October 10, 2025 at 6:52 AM
Dear Line, I was so grateful to see your lovely notes. Autumn Blessings, Dear Line, Daniel
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October 9, 2025 at 1:38 AM
Packed with meaning and imagism. Truly worth reading.
Rodgers Avatar
October 10, 2025 at 6:51 AM
Hello Victor, I pray your week is going well. Thank you for your most kind note. Autumn Blessings, Victor, Daniel
George Avatar
October 9, 2025 at 12:14 AM
I can always sense your admiration for your lovely partner. She is beautiful in and out, I am sure. An enchanting image and a wonderful sentiment, so poetically expressed.
Rodgers Avatar
October 10, 2025 at 6:50 AM
Dear Valsa, yes, my wife has been an inspiration for many a poem over the last 45 years. I appreciate your friendship and visits. Autumn Blessings, Dear Valsa, Daniel
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October 8, 2025 at 5:38 PM
This is breathtaking. :)
Rodgers Avatar
October 10, 2025 at 6:49 AM
Dear Paige, Thank you so much, my poetess friend. Autumn Blessings, Dear Paige, Daniel
M  Avatar
October 8, 2025 at 4:50 PM
Romance personified Daniel in so few words! Truly beautiful! Debx
Rodgers Avatar
October 10, 2025 at 6:48 AM
Dear Deb, Yes, romance is a continuous dance of life. I am grateful for your note. Autumn Blessings, Dear Deb, Daniel
Delaney Avatar
October 8, 2025 at 3:19 PM
A beautiful, romantic, Autumn memory. Your words captured a beautiful moment.
Rodgers Avatar
October 10, 2025 at 6:45 AM
Dear Suzanne, thank you, my friend and I appreciate your note. It is the beauty that surrounds us, inspires us. Autumn Blessings, Dear Suzanne, Daniel
Kendrick Avatar
October 8, 2025 at 2:49 PM
Ahh!!! I like the romantic feel to this one. The artwork to go along is very lovely. Thanks for sharing this one with us. My husband has some kind of growth on his larynx. We go back to the doctor tomorrow to get results from all the tests. Sara K
Rodgers Avatar
October 10, 2025 at 6:44 AM
Dear Sara, I pray that the tests went well for your husband and that whatever the growth is, it is treatable. Thank you for your note and visit. I will continue praying for you and your husband. Autumn Blessings, Dear Sara, Daniel
Sands Avatar
October 8, 2025 at 1:18 PM
This is so beautiful Daniel. I was led to it today and it captured me, the way you wrote it. Very nice! :)
Rodgers Avatar
October 10, 2025 at 6:43 AM
Dear Heidi, I am so grateful for your note, and those who most love are our greatest inspiration. Autumn Blessings, Dear Heidi, Daniel
Kerr Avatar
October 8, 2025 at 12:54 PM
Daniel, Sincere heartfelt thanks for reading, considering and of course your flattering comments on a work “Somewhere” On Foot 1and 2 which is very close to my heart. I don’t know whether you have read the other extract but thank you if you did. Your Imagist poem is absolutely stunning in its scope and detail. A concise masterpiece Howard
Rodgers Avatar
October 10, 2025 at 6:42 AM
Hello Howard, Thank you for your visit and note. I will have to go out and read your third one today. I appreciate letting me know, and look forward to another enlightening part of the story. Autumn Blessings, Howard, Daniel
Sheehan Avatar
October 8, 2025 at 12:42 PM
Nice piece. Great imagery. Good pic. Enjoyed.
Rodgers Avatar
October 10, 2025 at 6:39 AM
Hello Frank, thank you for your visit. Autumn Blessings, Frank, Daniel
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October 8, 2025 at 11:34 AM
- Strange to think about... we looked at the same moon on Monday night... a beautiful sight on a quiet autumn night, Daniel :) - hugs
Rodgers Avatar
October 8, 2025 at 11:40 AM
Dear Anne-Lise, I would always tell my three daughters when they went off to college to look up at the full moon, and that same full moon is the one I am looking at right now. Yes, I love an autumn full moon. Blessings, Dear Anne-Lise, Daniel
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