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Barren Branches

Barren Branches She had always wept, this Willow with joy, drooping to touch pond’s edge her children hugged her branches, her trunk their pillow soft touch of barefoot joy upon her branches youth’s never lasting song – forever’s pledge for lover’s - they must always take their chances as memories of toes and bark grow dimmer the dearth of joy and laughter’s silent dredge cold withering of branches growing slimmer leafless wings long past their ancient fledge ©6/24/2018 for Laura Loo – Rhyme Time 4 – 10 Lines Poetry Contest theme chosen - #5 Barren branches of a willow tree die

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Date: 7/30/2018 7:05:00 PM
Hello John … very nicely written John and how true it becomes - youth's never lasting song - thank you John - Lindsay
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Date: 6/30/2018 11:19:00 AM
Congratulations, John, on your great 2nd place win.. Lovely poem Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 6/29/2018 9:51:00 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful win, John - blessings and best wishes for continued success, my friend! :-)
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Date: 6/29/2018 7:28:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. A beautiful poem to go with your theme. :)
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Date: 6/29/2018 7:58:00 AM
Congratulations! I really enjoyed it.
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Date: 6/29/2018 7:04:00 AM
beautiful poem dear John, really enjoyed the rhythm and rhyme too, thank you for your entry and congratulations on your placement. Be blessed, -luloo :)
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Date: 6/24/2018 12:21:00 PM
Beautiful penning John, I expect this to place well in Laura's contest, got my vote ;) xomo my best to you!
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