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Barbie Pink

Barbie pink with buxom breast Spread across a bony chest Thus recline on bentwood chair As she unfurls her blended hair A passer by A darker night A fleeting thought A fairer sight Marble eyes with curled strong lash Stare glazed as plastic living naught Wander him across the street Breeze on skin this night has brought A corner turn A friend to greet A moment in this life to cheat Who will occupy that chair when Barbie pink’s no longer there?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 7/30/2010 5:02:00 AM
Good Morning David,, wow! i was just curios & snooping to see what your first poem would look like on the soup,,hope you do not mind. I enjoyed your poem.... I would say you are right About Barbie,, it will all up and leave. At times sooner than we think ...Have a nice and wonderful day,..LeeAnn
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Date: 2/9/2010 7:34:00 PM
Instant classic my friend... What a way to enter the soup.... Bravo!!!!!! Welcome, you will see more comments from me man... I like your style.....:JP]
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Date: 1/25/2010 11:13:00 AM
This poem is very neat. I like that you put much felling in your work. This is a master piece.
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Date: 1/6/2010 5:47:00 AM
Wonderful poem to be featured on the Soup.. it is an honor when they choose a poem among so many to be a featured one.. congrats on that accomplishment.. having four sons we never had Barbie Pink in our surroundings.. the connotation is great... SOUP MAIL REPLY.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 12/22/2009 3:20:00 AM
Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. Best wishes and much success in your writing endeavors. A. W. Nutter www.freewebs.com/abcedit
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Date: 12/22/2009 3:17:00 AM
Congratulations on your remarkable poetry being featured this week David. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors in 2010 whatever they may be. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/21/2009 11:41:00 AM
Congratulations on your featured poem this week, Merry Christmas to you >> James
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Date: 12/21/2009 11:19:00 AM
Congrats on your poem being featured this week!! Very well deserved. Merry Christmas and Happy New Year to you and yours. May 2010 be your best year ever! Love Light Patty
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Date: 12/21/2009 9:04:00 AM
Probably , Barbie Grey with her 2 fried eggs , boney knees and bockedy legs . Rgds. Ken ... Clever /witty piece , David .... Write onnnnn ...
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Date: 12/14/2009 4:57:00 PM
Another great poem, David! I could see the buxom-breasted Barbie and the impact it had on the passerby. Well done. Carolyn
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