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Baptismal

` pure waters annoint with rippled effect... trees whisper vespers ........................................................... Inspired by John Freeman's contest Nature's Precept Haiku

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Line Gauthier

Date: 4/16/2018 8:19:00 PM

Lovely, Carrie. I love your vision - all of your poetry seems to resonate with me.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/10/2011 11:52:00 AM

Enjoyed reading your work..Congrats..Sara

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/9/2011 10:23:00 PM

loving this, carrie..swinging cheers to you for the amazing award!! :) huggs

Jun-Jun Villanueva

Date: 7/9/2011 8:54:00 PM

CONGRATULATIONS carrie on your sweet win....*-*junjun

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/9/2011 3:52:00 PM

Congrats Carrie on your fantastic win with this brilliant beauty luv.. excellent words ...

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/9/2011 12:11:00 PM

Congratulations on your win Carrie in John Moses Freeman's "The Precept: Nature's Haiku"contest. Love, Carol

Natalie The Rogue Rhymer

Date: 7/9/2011 11:44:00 AM

Carrie-Nice! Congats. to you :)

Kash Poet

Date: 7/9/2011 10:29:00 AM

Congrats Carrie on your win!Wonderful take on the contest photo.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/9/2011 9:08:00 AM

My congratulations on this win in the contest of John, Carrie

John Freeman

Date: 7/9/2011 9:07:00 AM

Great Job Carrie, Congratulations, Thanks for support of this effort. Agape, Moses

Jack Horne

Date: 7/9/2011 8:53:00 AM

Many congrats, Carrie : )

Kash Poet

Date: 7/1/2011 7:27:00 PM

Wonderful approach to the contest photo.Enjoyed.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/1/2011 12:25:00 PM

Enjoyed reading the words that flowed from your pen today Carrie. I hope you have a wonderful fun filled weekend and that you find miles of inspiration along the way. Love, Carol

James Foulk

Date: 7/1/2011 11:42:00 AM

so warm and tender is this creative Haiku.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/30/2011 11:40:00 PM

wow, leave it to you, carrie , to pull this off most beautifully!

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 6/30/2011 6:35:00 PM

you have only 1 part, what you used for a cut is a restatement of lines 1 & 2, say you are looking at lines 1 & 2 the rippled affect of a drop of water? [you have 3 allusions to water drop/ripple/water] what did you hear, or taste or what else did you see that made you decide the scene felt hallowed? see how you are telling not showing?? fret...Light & Love

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/30/2011 3:35:00 PM

beautiful thought and a nice take on the prompt picture, Carrie