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Baptismal

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          pure waters annoint

               with rippled effect...

                   trees whisper vespers

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Inspired by John Freeman's contest
Nature's Precept Haiku

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Line Gauthier

April 16, 2018 at 8:19 PM

Lovely, Carrie. I love your vision - all of your poetry seems to resonate with me.

Sara Kendrick

July 10, 2011 at 11:52 AM

Enjoyed reading your work..Congrats..Sara

Nette Onclaud

July 9, 2011 at 10:23 PM

loving this, carrie..swinging cheers to you for the amazing award!! :) huggs

Jun-Jun Villanueva

July 9, 2011 at 8:54 PM

CONGRATULATIONS carrie on your sweet win....*-*junjun

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

July 9, 2011 at 3:52 PM

Congrats Carrie on your fantastic win with this brilliant beauty luv.. excellent words ...

Carol Sunshine Brown

July 9, 2011 at 12:11 PM

Congratulations on your win Carrie in John Moses Freeman's "The Precept: Nature's Haiku"contest. Love, Carol

Natalie The Rogue Rhymer

July 9, 2011 at 11:44 AM

Carrie-Nice! Congats. to you :)

Kash Poet

July 9, 2011 at 10:29 AM

Congrats Carrie on your win!Wonderful take on the contest photo.

Dr.Ram Mehta

July 9, 2011 at 9:08 AM

My congratulations on this win in the contest of John, Carrie

John Freeman

July 9, 2011 at 9:07 AM

Great Job Carrie, Congratulations, Thanks for support of this effort. Agape, Moses

Jack Horne

July 9, 2011 at 8:53 AM

Many congrats, Carrie : )

Kash Poet

July 1, 2011 at 7:27 PM

Wonderful approach to the contest photo.Enjoyed.

Carol Sunshine Brown

July 1, 2011 at 12:25 PM

Enjoyed reading the words that flowed from your pen today Carrie. I hope you have a wonderful fun filled weekend and that you find miles of inspiration along the way. Love, Carol

James Foulk

July 1, 2011 at 11:42 AM

so warm and tender is this creative Haiku.

Andrea Dietrich

June 30, 2011 at 11:40 PM

wow, leave it to you, carrie , to pull this off most beautifully!

Debbie Guzzi

June 30, 2011 at 6:35 PM

you have only 1 part, what you used for a cut is a restatement of lines 1 & 2, say you are looking at lines 1 & 2 the rippled affect of a drop of water? [you have 3 allusions to water drop/ripple/water] what did you hear, or taste or what else did you see that made you decide the scene felt hallowed? see how you are telling not showing?? fret...Light & Love

Dr.Ram Mehta

June 30, 2011 at 3:35 PM

beautiful thought and a nice take on the prompt picture, Carrie

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