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Less vibrant berries have sweeter seeds. Foster them for you reap what you sow.   Bees' wildflowers flourish on flowing water. Elsewhere, a rose is opening its wings.
Written: March 23, 2023 Written for the contest, Bantus sponsor, Suzanne Delaney

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Date: 3/30/2023 11:08:00 AM
- Excellent use of metaphors, Las :) - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs
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Date: 3/27/2023 4:01:00 AM
Spectacular writing, Lasaad! Enjoyed very much!
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Date: 3/26/2023 2:13:00 PM
WoW! Lasaad, You did a good job writing in this new form. Nice metaphors, advice and imagery. Best wishes in the contest. Enjoy the rest of day:-) Alexis
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Date: 3/26/2023 9:27:00 AM
I love your allusion...
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Date: 3/26/2023 2:56:00 AM
What an imagery! What a photo! Both are of exquisite beauty, my dearest friend, Lasaad. Good luck! Blessings.
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Date: 3/25/2023 8:37:00 PM
beautiful penning, thanks yann
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