Banshee

BANSHEE


From out of the dusk, through a thin shaft of light
A dark shape appears on this cold misty night
A disfigured mutation, with a look of forlorn
She’s a tortured creation, she is the unborn

From the bleak depths of hell, and out of its fires
She ghosts in the shadows, the gutters and mires
She can smell the last breath that you take when you die
As she creeps through the gloaming, to wait for the sigh

You can sense her ill presence, and feel her dark power
As she glides on the wind, till the death taking hour
That’s when the creatures, they turn and they flee
As another soul’s claimed, by a wailing banshee
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Ekwobi Avatar
August 29, 2022 at 7:30 AM
A Decided Interest by Leslie Wilson in a mortifying subject matter, which I understand, The French Idealist offers plugged ears; Leslie Wilson is A Realist who might, sadly, be ignored.
Cook Avatar
August 25, 2022 at 1:02 AM
She glides on the wind- brings to life the really ethereal nature of her. I really enjoyed the dark side of this poem. It enticed me to read lots more of your poems and I really enjoyed them. Have a sparkly day Spirit xx3
Wilson Avatar
August 26, 2022 at 4:09 AM
Hi Spirit. I grew up in Northern Ireland hearing about the Banshee and it always scared the bejesus out of me. Thanks for reading my madness lol
Duncan Avatar
August 24, 2022 at 2:35 PM
I like the feel of this write :-)
Wilson Avatar
August 26, 2022 at 4:10 AM
Hi Debbie. I'm glad you like the feel of this piece, that's kinda what I was aiming at
Inman Avatar
August 23, 2022 at 4:28 PM
Really enjoyed this Leslie.
Wilson Avatar
August 26, 2022 at 4:11 AM
Thanks for reading this James
Barry-Nishanian Avatar
August 23, 2022 at 3:22 PM
Was sent email to meet you. This was a very intense poem. "she is the unborn". Wow! Going to go and read more of your works.
Wilson Avatar
August 26, 2022 at 4:12 AM
Thanks for reading this Barbara. It was a fun thing to write
Marcum Wong Avatar
July 27, 2018 at 6:11 PM
A warm welcome to Poetry Soup Leslie. This is a wonderful poem with chilling imagery. Congratulations on having it featured! This gem is going into my Faves. So nice to meet you through your poetry. Aloha, Connie : )
Wilson Avatar
July 30, 2018 at 4:04 AM
Ah Connie. Thanks so much for comments and the welcome. Lovely to meet you too
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