Banned

My grandpa was a drinking man
he never lost a dealer’s hand
	we hired a caregiver
	to tend his bad liver
from bottle and table he’s banned

He tried to sneak drink and a game
and was feeling the stare of fame
	drew a royal flush
	his liver turned to mush
his game will never be the same
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Krutsinger Avatar
August 17, 2022 at 12:07 AM
This is sadly what happens to so many! I hope this is fiction.
Fowler Avatar
August 17, 2022 at 6:15 AM
Totally fiction Caren. My grandfathers were hard-working, admirable men. Thanks for stopping by! Linda
Wolf Avatar
August 6, 2022 at 11:43 PM
Well, at least grandpa left the (card) game a winner! lol. Cute one, LAF, gw
Fowler Avatar
August 7, 2022 at 5:14 AM
Thanks gw. Glad you got a little smile. :) laf
Baker Avatar
August 6, 2022 at 3:28 PM
An entertaining Limerick, Linda. I really enjoy reading your poetry. Thanks for sharing your talent with us. A poet friend in Texas, Bill
Fowler Avatar
August 6, 2022 at 3:53 PM
Many thanks for the stop by and read Bill! And especially for the nice comment your East Texas neighbor :) Linda
Seeker Avatar
August 6, 2022 at 7:22 AM
Tsk, tsk, naughty grandpa!
Fowler Avatar
August 6, 2022 at 7:52 AM
teehee...Thanks for stopping by! Linda
Dietrich Avatar
August 5, 2022 at 4:36 PM
that was very cute humor, LInda!!
Fowler Avatar
August 5, 2022 at 6:57 PM
Thanks so much Andrea! I hope you go t a smile from it. Linda
Cunningham Avatar
August 5, 2022 at 8:42 AM
Oops one too many I'd say lol. Hope you have a bright weekend Linda. Tom
Fowler Avatar
August 5, 2022 at 9:59 AM
Hey Tom. You've brightened my weekend with your visit! Thanks! Linda
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