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Bangladesh

Sitting on the peak of mountain, whose face frequently I see; walking with my beloved on the streets of Rome, whose words I remember; like a pet pigeon, to whom my heart and body come back when the sun sets; setting whose eyes into my eyes, I see the beauty of a yellow bird and seeing the prosaic fly of crow and shalik I get every day speechless both in joy and wonder- she is my Bangladesh, as dearest to me as water for thirst at a noon of Chaitra; in a winter-morning she is my shawl of Kashmir, my safe home during a storm and rain, and the sail of my good luck upstream swelling like a tandur-bread. Writing my name on that sail, I, the last boatman of century, have started rowing my boat laying stake to life. *shalik- a kind of bird * tandur- a kind of big bread

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Date: 7/6/2013 10:57:00 PM
Congratulations, in Cyndi's "LOVE LETTERS TO THE INDIAN SUBCONTINENT: " always & forever * Linda
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Sayeed Abubakar
Date: 7/7/2013 9:11:00 AM
Where were u, fear friend?
Date: 7/6/2013 8:18:00 PM
This is absolutely stunning and elegantly written, Sayeed...I am both greatful and honored to have discovered your poetry sir - Tim
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Date: 7/6/2013 7:39:00 PM
SAYEED, A NICE WINNING, LOVE LETTER...... SKAT
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Date: 7/5/2013 8:08:00 PM
Congratz on your win, Sayeed :)
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Date: 7/5/2013 5:13:00 PM
Beautiful tribute to your homeland. Congratulations.
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Date: 7/5/2013 1:46:00 PM
Sayeed congrats on your fantastic win. Enjoyed reading it. Connie
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Date: 7/4/2013 8:04:00 PM
Sayeed, this is an incredible poem... I was blown away. Thank you for entering it, sharing it with me... true art! True craft! Smiles from Cyndi
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Date: 5/29/2013 7:52:00 AM
This poem is on Bangladesh, my motherland.
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