Banana Surprise

Banana went to culinary college
Yellow, firm, wanted so much knowledge,
Standing up in last class,
Ending up in large mass,
Now was the time for all to acknowledge.


Written for

Sponsor Deborah Guzzi 
Contest Name The once was a man from Dunkirk..
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Pettit Avatar
January 20, 2011 at 9:25 PM
Did Banana graduate with honors? This looks like a good limerick.
Guzzi Avatar
January 20, 2011 at 4:52 PM
Thanks so much for trying I hope you try one for the kids animal limerick contest, I'll try to be of more help! Light & Love
Guzzi Avatar
January 17, 2011 at 8:16 AM
You must start with an unstressed word in line 1 start with "A banana.."then put an ' where the a is in culinary which will shorten the syllable count then that line's OK Line..all the rest of the lines are slighty of meter, I try later to advise you there may not be enough time the contest is full, you need da da DUM/da da DUM etc
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January 16, 2011 at 7:49 PM
good luck in the contest~SKAT
Onclaud Avatar
January 16, 2011 at 6:23 PM
tickles, tickles, cecil... funny limerick that will surely be noted in the contest.. suprb stuf! :) huggs, nette
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