Bambi’s Revenge

The hunter laughed, his rifle bright,
his boots like thunder in the night--
but deep within the twisted trees,
something stirred among the leaves.

Not a whisper, not a sound,
just breath like smoke along the ground.
A shadow moved--too fast, too wrong,
its eyes like embers burning strong.

"You took her life, now you will see--"
"the price of blood belongs to me."

The hunter turned, his hands went slack,
as antlers rose--tall, sharp, black.
Not bone, not wood, but something old,
a hunger carved in silent gold.

The forest wept, the branches swayed,
as Bambi stalked his helpless prey--
no longer soft, no longer mild,
but wrath reborn in Nature’s child.

A scream, a shot--too late, too late--
the hunter met his mother’s fate.
And when the dawn bled through the trees,
his skull lay tangled in the leaves.

Bambi watched with hollowed grace,
the morning light upon his face.
"No more hunters. No more pain."
"This is my forest. I remain."
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Pettit Avatar
April 23, 2025 at 11:20 AM
I had to check this one out because I recently posted a poem titled "A Bambi Boom". This is a fanciful write with good descriptiveness and rhyming. Keep up the good work!
Leach Avatar
April 26, 2025 at 2:36 PM
"Thank you so much, Robert! I'm really glad you stopped by -- I'll have to check out your 'Bambi Boom' too! It’s so much fun when poems connect like that. Wishing you lots of inspiration and happy writing!"
Greenhough Avatar
February 27, 2025 at 9:23 PM
I'm an animal lover, so I relate to Bambi's feelings. Your description of revenge is realistic. In reality, a male deer does occasionally kill a person. I enjoy this poem, and Bambi too.
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